Angel in the darkness – An Ambrosia Challenge
Prologue The first time I saw you was like magic. I was a waiter in “the house of beautiful skills” when you where playing piano. I never had heard such beautiful music before. I had never seen suc...
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"roseinblack69;14887795" wrote:"Marialein;14887556" wrote:"swcheppes;14886201" wrote:
This reminded me of the movie Ghost a bit when Patrick Swazye was trying to pick things up as a ghost :) Lovely chapter!
I have never seen the film :D but I guess it is no new idea of me. Thank you for reading <3"VIRTUALEE;14886746" wrote:
Your words are so poetic - I loved this line, "... I still loved to sit there and breath in the scent of the old mahogany wood." It provides an imagery and I can almost smell the mahogany :) <3 I cant wait to see how Shai and Angel help eachother :) <3
I never thought that I could be poetic :D I wrote this chapter in 45 minutes and posted it without thinking twice about it. I make that with every chapter ;) you know that you always make me blush, right?"roseinblack69;14887415" wrote:
I also thought about movie Ghost like @swcheppes when I read this chapter :) According to all I know about ghosts, poltergeist and other paranormal things it was very logic movement of author <3 Everything needs an energy, no matter you are dead or you are alive. If even you are ghost you have to learn how to live in that form what Angel tries to do. I hope she'll reach her goal. Very well written and great chapter as always! <3
I have the idea from a book called auracle. It is a really good book ;)
As always thank you all for reading <3
Maybe someday I'll find this book and read it, too ;) By the way, Ghost is an old movie, but it's sensible, I'd recommend you to watch it someday ;) <3
I know that ghost is an old film. I guess I never watched it cause I don't like Patrick Swazye :D
"Sterretjeee;14887991" wrote:
That last sentence... Darn I want more :lol:
Me too :D
"Spottydog714;14888775" wrote:
I hope Angle discovers what she is stuck here for.
she will. One day …
"anaitapeva;14889978" wrote:
Well I make Virtualee's words mine. It was an amazing chapter!
Ohh thanks :blush:
"Frantika;14890949" wrote:
Love this story. I can't wait until Angel and Shaiyenne actually meet!
Thank you :blush: Well, about that … maybe one day …
"Hemera123;14893064" wrote:
I love that Angel has to practice before she can lift things properly or play the piano. I wonder will Shai ever see her? Maybe Shai's children can? I'm happy that Angel has learned how to cope with the darkness.
if you read the rules of the challenge you will know the answer, but maybe I will break them or bend them a bit. I am not sure now.
I feel also better knowing that Angel is doing better in the darkness :)
