I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I have been an avid reader all of my life and I have to say, I hope you are writing professionally because if you are not, it is a darn shame. Your style is commanding and descriptive in a way that immediately sucked me in and made me want more. 

Please post or message me a link if you have other writings or publishing's outside of the sims forum. It has been a long while since I have felt compelled to pick up a new author. 

The Hunter’s Journey: Blog #8

Forgotten Hollow is not silent tonight—it is listening.

The mist drapes itself over the cobblestones like a shroud, twisting into shapes that dissolve when I stare too long. No light spills from the windows of the crooked houses; their shutters are fastened tight, their inhabitants hidden away. The villagers here do not speak of the manor. They only glance at it from the corners of their eyes, muttering prayers to gods who have long since abandoned them.

Straud Manor rises above them all—stone and shadow, its towers clawing at the sky. It is a house, yes, but also a throne, a prison, a monument to something ancient and enduring. Even the moonlight seems reluctant to touch its walls.

I cross the threshold. The door moans open as though it resents me.

The air inside is damp, rank with mildew and age, yet beneath it lies another note: metallic, coppery, faint but unmistakable. Blood. My skin prickles. The floorboards creak beneath my boots like bones snapping.

Then comes the music.

The organ drifts through the halls, notes like knives dragged slowly across glass. It is not melody. It is memory. Each chord carries centuries of grief, cruelty, triumph. The house trembles with it, and so do I.

“Lost, are you?”

His voice glides from the shadows, velvet and cold. Vladislaus Straud steps into view. His presence swallows the room, though he moves with the grace of a man accustomed to both court and battlefield. His eyes linger on me—ancient eyes, patient, knowing.

I let my lips tremble. “I… yes. My boyfriend and I—there was a fight. He drove off and left me here. My phone died, and I saw your light. I thought maybe—maybe you had a phone I could use?”

Straud’s smile is almost tender. “Ah. The cruelty of young men. Rash. Thoughtless. You must forgive him; time will teach him patience… if time is kind.” He chuckles softly, the sound resonant, practiced. “But no, I keep no such device. Telephones, they chatter endlessly. They leave no room for silence, no room for thought. And I value silence… immensely.”

My stomach tightens. His words sound reasonable, even poetic, yet beneath them runs a current that makes my pulse stumble.

“I could try your neighbors then—”

Straud’s hand flicks, elegant, dismissive. “The neighbors,” he interrupts smoothly, “are not as hospitable as I. They cling to their little lives with trembling fingers and distrust all who wander near. They would sooner bolt their doors than offer you kindness. No, no… here, you are safer.”

I lower my gaze, feigning hesitation. “I don’t want to intrude…”

“You mistake me, dear girl.” He steps closer. The candlelight dances across his pale skin, flawless as carved marble. “Hospitality is not intrusion. You will remain here tonight. At dawn, I shall see that you are escorted to a place more… suitable.”

He extends his hand. I hesitate, then allow mine to slip into his.

His skin is cool—too cool. Smooth, almost unnaturally so, like polished stone warmed just slightly by touch. His grip is firm, yet his thumb brushes the back of my hand with a gentleness that borders on intimate. My chest tightens. The hunter in me screams at the wrongness, but the mask I wear forces my lips into a grateful smile.

“Thank you,” I whisper, forcing a tremor into my voice. “You’re very kind.”

He inclines his head as though accepting praise, but his smile lingers too long, too sharp. “Kindness is rare, is it not? But then, I have had… lifetimes… to learn it.”

Lifetimes.

He guides me up the staircase, his hand never loosening from mine. Each step feels like a surrender, the boards groaning as though warning me to turn back. His presence is overwhelming: the scent of old parchment and faint smoke clinging to his coat, the subtle pull of power that radiates from him. He is not simply a man escorting a guest. He is a predator leading prey deeper into the lair.

And yet I let him.

I play the part, wide-eyed and timid, as he shows me to a room draped in heavy velvet curtains, the bed carved with grotesque faces that leer from the headboard.

“Rest,” Straud says softly, his hand brushing mine one last time. “Tomorrow, all will seem less dire. The night always magnifies sorrows.”

His words are comforting, almost fatherly. But his eyes—those ancient, pitiless eyes—betray something else. Hunger. Curiosity. Possession.

The door shuts.

In my pocket, the vial of elixir presses hard against my thigh. My salvation. My weapon.

I lay down, calm on the surface, though my pulse races in my throat. He believes me harmless. Helpless. Caught.

But tomorrow, it will not be my sorrow the night magnifies.

It will be his ruin.

Looking forward to the rest of the story! Love it!

Awesome, keep it coming 🤩

simgirl1010 wrote:

Edit: You might want to post a little blurb in the What Happened thread when you update. With a link to your update.

I second this 🙃

Blog 6: The Monster's House

I’m not hiding. Not today.

I stand at the edge of his property in the harsh light of noon, the sun burning away shadows but not the weight of this place. The manor looms ahead, its stone walls blotched with age, its shutters sealed against daylight. To anyone else, it would look abandoned. But I know better. He’s inside. Sleeping. Dreaming, maybe. Always waiting.

I carry no weapons. No crossbow, no stake, no holy water. Just myself, my eyes fixed on the house, my pulse steady. For years, I thought the only ending was fire and blood. But standing here, I realize I was wrong.

The next part of my plan is forming, slow and sharp like a blade being honed. Death is too simple for Vladislaus Straud. Too merciful. What would cut deeper than a trusted hand turning against him—not to kill, but to rob him of what he treasures most? His power.

He lives on arrogance. On the certainty that nothing can touch him. Strip that away, and he is nothing but a hollow man in a decaying house. That will be my vengeance.

And as I stare at his fortress in the daylight, I promise myself: when the betrayal comes, he won’t see it coming.

Entry 7: The Bait

The plan is set. Tonight, I will stand at his door and knock.

No shadows to hide in. No weapons to grip for comfort. Just me, wrapped in a lie I’ve rehearsed a thousand times in my head.

I’ll play the part of the broken girl—lost, abandoned, desperate for shelter. “Please… my boyfriend left me here… I don’t know where I am… can I just sleep inside until morning?” I’ll let my voice crack, let my hands tremble. I’ll look like easy prey.

Because that’s what he wants. Vladislaus Straud doesn’t strike quickly—no, he savors the hunt. He’ll draw it out, coil fear around me like smoke, feed on the anticipation of the kill. He’ll let me in. He won’t be able to resist.

And all the while, I’ll be watching him. Measuring every step, every word, every flicker of hunger in his eyes.

He thinks the chase is his game. He thinks I’m the mouse.

But tonight, the mouse walks willingly into the trap—because she knows something the monster doesn’t.

I am not afraid.

I'm hooked. What a gripping introduction! Bookmarked.

Edit: You might want to post a little blurb in the What Happened thread when you update. With a link to your update.