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diego2memphis
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4 years ago

Dark Form (A Supernatural Story)

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Vala Diallo finds herself changing into someone that she doesn’t understand after a late-night visit from an unknown man. In her attempt to suppress a strange new thirst for blood, she commits an unforgivable act. Now she must hide what she is from those closest to her…while also trying to control her new urges.

She’s in a race against time desperately seeking a cure for her condition before she does the unthinkable once again. But there’s someone out there who’ll do anything it takes to make sure she doesn’t succeed.

Note: This story is not new. I started writing it in 2017, but after completing 17 chapters, I suddenly lost the motivation to continue it. After rereading the notes of what I had planned for this story, I decided that it deserves to be completed. So, I will begin reposting it, then continue where I left off.

If you’ve already read it, please be patient as I repost it. If you haven’t…I hope you enjoy!

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  • Whoops! Long time, no see. I thought I bookmarked, but apparently not. Fixed it now. :D

    Anyway, that is a very thought-provoking chapter. Does Vala lack a sense of self because she raised herself? Or would she have that problem anyway if things were different? Even worse, maybe, since she couldn't discern her own opinions from those she absorbed from her parents if they were more present... not that she is likely to realize that, of course. She only sees what she felt a sore lack of. I wonder how she would react to the possibility of having an elder vampire "parent" now. Would she see it as a chance of getting what she lacked... or would she spook because she doesn't trust anyone in that role anymore?
    I'm definitely very curious about where you are going with this one. :D
  • "_Gina;c-18220373" wrote:
    Whoops! Long time, no see. I thought I bookmarked, but apparently not. Fixed it now. :D

    Anyway, that is a very thought-provoking chapter. Does Vala lack a sense of self because she raised herself? Or would she have that problem anyway if things were different? Even worse, maybe, since she couldn't discern her own opinions from those she absorbed from her parents if they were more present... not that she is likely to realize that, of course. She only sees what she felt a sore lack of. I wonder how she would react to the possibility of having an elder vampire "parent" now. Would she see it as a chance of getting what she lacked... or would she spook because she doesn't trust anyone in that role anymore?
    I'm definitely very curious about where you are going with this one. :D


    Hey there! I'm glad to see you back. Wow! I love all the thought you've put into Vala's story. Vala definitely has some abandonment issues, and I do believe it stems from her past. It will also have an impact on her future. Time will tell how she'll react to meeting her "vampire" parent. There are so many different ways that can go. I'm currently working on finishing up a story arc in my current legacy story, but I'll be back to posting updates on Dark Form very soon. Thanks, for sticking around. I appreciate all the feedback and questions.
  • @diego2memphis Don't thank me for sticking around, that's your doing, right there. Between your writing being awesome and my love for occults (and vamps in particular, oops! XD) I couldn't not. *gets comfortable to patiently wait*
  • "_Gina;c-18220701" wrote:
    @diego2memphis Don't thank me for sticking around, that's your doing, right there. Between your writing being awesome and my love for occults (and vamps in particular, oops! XD) I couldn't not. *gets comfortable to patiently wait*


    That's so sweet of you and helps keep me motivated. New ideas are flowing, so I'll be working on a new update soon.

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