Welcome, welcome in the age of heroes! As I've already written some stories before, I wasn't completely new to it when starting this one. However, it was the first time I didn't use my native language so please generously overlook the fact that the first chapters are not perfect - it gets better, as do the pictures and storytelling in the whole ;) You are always more than welcome to point out grammar or other mistakes that make reading hard for you. Now, please enjoy! :) ---
In case you finish reading this story and need more of the same kind, I can recommend Marialein's tribe Naheli, roseinblack69's Blessing Moon Tribe and Meggles' Suzu Clan. If you have any other Amazon or historical stories or gameplay to recommend, do not hesitate to do so by PM or here.
So I read the last written chapter. Feeling worried for the young amazon queen :/ As I told in my comment on your Blog this time I don't agree with Penthelisea... But let's see what will happen later ;) Waiting for the next chapter <3
First of all, referring to @Marialein 's remark about the child inheriting hair colors. I probably should tell all of you right now that if the child gets Penthesilea's hair color, I'll give it just some brown instead. All brown runs in her family.
"Marialein;c-15889681" wrote: Wow. Now Penthesilea could really need a friend ... I guess Io won't be able to make things better in the whole situation. By the way was she even asked? I don't think so. Seems pretty unfair to me. However, i am happy that the kid won't be killed if it is a boy. Well, if it doesn't get Haimons hair ...
It seems as if Tony is kinda annoyed of Haimon … http://i.imgur.com/KQXkAfe.png
Io will have a hard time... But you'll learn at least a bit more in the next chapter. It's right I didn't mention that she was asked, but Penthesilea did. She may not have acted the wisest way but she would never take such a risk without knowing for sure that her future provider would agree. Yes, I'm glad as well the child wouldn't be killed in that case. Serkon made this "kind proposal" all of himself, it wasn't planned. All the better. :grin: If he doesn't inherit red hair.
Your picture really cracks me up! :smiley: (Avatar Haimon isn't so amused, though.) Well, he deserves this. Usually he is the one being annoyed. But hey, he managed to sit at a table with our all-time favorite meatball for a few seconds without dying. :p
"Sterretjeee;c-15889846" wrote: Nooo, nooo wait! What just happened! I feel like I missed a huge chunk. When did her hunky man-toy start despising her?!
Sorry to do that to you, but maybe it helps knowing that he did the right thing to save his reputation? If he'd actually supported her against Evandros, he would have lost the other leaders' trust and friendship. And he wouldn't be Serkon if he'd just let Penthesilea do whatever she wants without even asking him. He's still a king himself and no low slave, right? ;)
@roseinblack69 Goodness, thank you so much for that huuuuge compliment and all the lovely comments on the blog! <3 It's so much fun to learn what you think, also the comparisons to your Amadahy. I see the similarities now, too xD Won't get rid of that resemblance so soon, ha. Wow, you've read all of this so fast :scream: Next chapter will be uploaded friday, at least that's the plan. We all know about how reliable plans are.
"MrsRacooney;c-15890469" wrote: First of all, referring to @Marialein 's remark about the child inheriting hair colors. I probably should tell all of you right now that if the child gets Penthesilea's hair color, I'll give it just some brown instead. All brown runs in her family.
"Marialein;c-15889681" wrote: Wow. Now Penthesilea could really need a friend ... I guess Io won't be able to make things better in the whole situation. By the way was she even asked? I don't think so. Seems pretty unfair to me. However, i am happy that the kid won't be killed if it is a boy. Well, if it doesn't get Haimons hair ...
It seems as if Tony is kinda annoyed of Haimon … http://i.imgur.com/KQXkAfe.png
Io will have a hard time... But you'll learn at least a bit more in the next chapter. It's right I didn't mention that she was asked, but Penthesilea did. She may not have acted the wisest way but she would never take such a risk without knowing for sure that her future provider would agree. Yes, I'm glad as well the child wouldn't be killed in that case. Serkon made this "kind proposal" all of himself, it wasn't planned. All the better. :grin: If he doesn't inherit red hair.
Your picture really cracks me up! :smiley: (Avatar Haimon isn't so amused, though.) Well, he deserves this. Usually he is the one being annoyed. But hey, he managed to sit at a table with our all-time favorite meatball for a few seconds without dying. :p
"Sterretjeee;c-15889846" wrote: Nooo, nooo wait! What just happened! I feel like I missed a huge chunk. When did her hunky man-toy start despising her?!
Sorry to do that to you, but maybe it helps knowing that he did the right thing to save his reputation? If he'd actually supported her against Evandros, he would have lost the other leaders' trust and friendship. And he wouldn't be Serkon if he'd just let Penthesilea do whatever she wants without even asking him. He's still a king himself and no low slave, right? ;)
@roseinblack69 Goodness, thank you so much for that huuuuge compliment and all the lovely comments on the blog! <3 It's so much fun to learn what you think, also the comparisons to your Amadahy. I see the similarities now, too xD Won't get rid of that resemblance so soon, ha. Wow, you've read all of this so fast :scream: Next chapter will be uploaded friday, at least that's the plan. We all know about how reliable plans are.
I'll wait for the new chapter and friday ;) I believe that Amadahy and Penthesilea would be great friends ;) And you deserve all these compliments :blush:
Just found your stuff today (and read all of it). I really like you're story so far! Never played this kind of story before, so I'm really excited to see where it goes, especially because you're characters have vivid personalities. #teamredhair :)
@roseinblack69 Just imagining those two meeting... Whoever wanted to deal with them, he/she would have a lot to do. :D I mean, one is already exhausting, but two of them!
@allysimbuilds You've read all of it? In one go? You're crazy! :smiley: But, thank you! When I started I was so excited as well and so far it's absolutely worth every effort! Also, for you a picture of Haimon who autonomously went up to Penthesilea during a shoot to discuss his fears of commitment :joy: It was so cute that I couldn't stop or punish him and she didn't seem to bother too much.
I love Serkon very much :blush: <3 He is very wise, calm and his soul has the muscles if you get what I mean ;) Haha, @MrsRacooney, that would be funny to see Amadahy Blessing Moon and Penthesilea together, all these tribes and especially Zeuxippe would go crazy :D So if you need Amadahy Blessing Moon for Penthesilea's friends and allies you can download her in the gallery ;) By the way, you'll have to teach me how to make the chapter links in weebly. It's a shame to say, but I don't know :neutral:
@roseinblack69 Understand you very well concerning Serkon... :wink: Though each time I think I would have chosen him Haimon does something adorable xD Or is angry. *whispers* He looks so good being angry! Unfortunately, gen 1 is almost finished writing. :unamused: Perhaps a special chapter someday?
Haimon is a much more interesting character to me--he brings some life to the party! I also am really interested in knowing what kind of child he and Penthesilea would have. Probably a force to be reckoned with! I guess I just hope that that story would be an interesting one. On the other hand, Serkon's kid might be a natural leader! I guess I don't even consider Protego as an option for the child's father... lol. Poor Protego!
"MrsRacooney;c-15891880" wrote: @roseinblack69 Understand you very well concerning Serkon... :wink: Though each time I think I would have chosen him Haimon does something adorable xD Or is angry. *whispers* He looks so good being angry! Unfortunately, gen 1 is almost finished writing. :unamused: Perhaps a special chapter someday?
Haimon is jealous :D And yes, he is very handsome... Sure, I'd like to know more about Haimon. Maybe in the future chapters? ;) Amadahy is very disciplined amazon warrior, so she'll wait ;)
"allysimbuilds;c-15891918" wrote: Haimon is a much more interesting character to me--he brings some life to the party! I also am really interested in knowing what kind of child he and Penthesilea would have. Probably a force to be reckoned with! I guess I just hope that that story would be an interesting one. On the other hand, Serkon's kid might be a natural leader! I guess I don't even consider Protego as an option for the child's father... lol. Poor Protego!
Goodness, force, that's the right word. *shivers* Would probably drive the writer insane. xD As for Protego, you just seem to go along with what the queen thinks. Still, everything is possible andconcerning the character I roll the traits but see to that they fit the parents somehow: Haimon x Penthesilea: a force, just like you say Serkon x Penthesilea: at least something with quite a self-assurance... Protego x Penthesilea: anything possible, I guess?
"roseinblack69;c-15892060" wrote:
"MrsRacooney;c-15891880" wrote: @roseinblack69 Understand you very well concerning Serkon... :wink: Though each time I think I would have chosen him Haimon does something adorable xD Or is angry. *whispers* He looks so good being angry! Unfortunately, gen 1 is almost finished writing. :unamused: Perhaps a special chapter someday?
Haimon is jealous :D And yes, he is very handsome... Sure, I'd like to know more about Haimon. Maybe in the future chapters? ;) Amadahy is very disciplined amazon warrior, so she'll wait ;)
Haha, might be the case? Maybe that's why he's always in bad mood. Oh, good that you have such a patient queen. :smiley:
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