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This is one heck of an opener, I really like the way you've described it. It didn't feel over-dramatic at all which just makes it even more chilling. I already feel utterly awful for Zelda and her family situation. It's really, really good that you write how Zelda's life has affected her as well, with the terrible memories coming back now and again, and her standoffish attitude against other guys. There's a moment's peace when she finally gets away, but the mental scars will follow her wherever she goes. Let's hope she can make a new life now.