The first section about the siblings was very funny to read, but what will stick in my mind is probably the part about Asher and Adelise.
I cut so much of the siblings from my last few chapters that I really wanted to include them here. Originally, I was going to stick this in the middle of the chapter, but I decided to put it at the beginning instead of putting it in the middle (which would have been annoying) or just deleting it.
It really sounds like they both need some time for thinking now, a vacation away from each other could actually be helpful too…
Good point. I worry that a short vacation won't benefit Asher. He's already had lots of time to think, but he's still… At least, Adelise can perhaps benefit.