Heffner Legacy: [Updated 09/05] 4.29 The Cold Shoulder

Bhahahahahahahaha! Just caught up. I'm crying, this is brilliant! Lol! :D :D :D

lololol! (<-- needed a lol button) That made me laugh too much! Excellent behind the scenes!

"ThePlumbob;14246150" wrote:
Bhahahahahahahaha! Just caught up. I'm crying, this is brilliant! Lol! :D :D :D

I must admit I had few evil laughter moments too while putting last two chapters together. :smiley:

"sabreene;14246210" wrote:
lololol! (<-- needed a lol button) That made me laugh too much! Excellent behind the scenes!

Glad you had fun and thanks for commenting!

Back with an update.

I'm a bit conflicted about the end of the chapter. Let me know what you think.

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Chapter 2.10 is here.

Find out, why Beryl gets realy angry.

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Awesome chapter! I'm rooting for Tony and B :)

Hey, I just read your first chapter. I would catch up entirely, but I have my only story to write... I will catch up eventually though, once I have free-time to look at but not create, y'know? It seems excellent and very professional so far- I feel you're more of a storyteller than somebody who goes directly by the challenge rules.

"Julyvee94;14257039" wrote:
Awesome chapter! I'm rooting for Tony and B :)

I got carried away more than a little with these two. I'm sorry for neglecting the rest of the family. On the other hand, no, I'm not sorry, I'm having too much fun. :smiley: Tony is such a complex character and he keeps sparking my imagination. Though I'm afraid I've put the rest of possible heirs in great disadvantage by focusing on Beryl. Well, we all have favourites, don't we?

"iiimee;14257078" wrote:
Hey, I just read your first chapter. I would catch up entirely, but I have my only story to write... I will catch up eventually though, once I have free-time to look at but not create, y'know? It seems excellent and very professional so far- I feel you're more of a storyteller than somebody who goes directly by the challenge rules.

Hey! Thank you so much for dropping by and commenting. I hope you'll enjoy the story when you find time to read it. I don't keep any scores, since playing strictly by the rules is too limiting. I only use the rules as a guidline to know what to build next in Newcrest, what aspiration the heir should pursue etc.

I like Tony even though he's a little more than full of himself. Hopefully Beryl will change da boy. ;)

"pammiechick;14257355" wrote:
I like Tony even though he's a little more than full of himself. Hopefully Beryl will change da boy. ;)

We'll see. They're both handful. :smile:
Thanks for commenting.