I made a build guide, hope you like it! :D

Hi everyone, I made a build guide on my website. I spent quite a lot of time making it and wondered what you all thought of it. I'd love some feedback on how I can improve my writing for the Sims 4 and my video too.

https://teamoverpowered.com/guides/sims-4-build-mode-guide-for-beginners/

Thanks for reading.