Lucky Girl - Completed
Updates Wednesdays Evelyn "Evie" Kilbride has always been the quiet friend, a shy girl who never had much to say, happy to wait in the wings as her best friend Kelly, the loud, confident ...
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Very good chapter! <3
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You have captured the moods anf feelings of your characters well :) Im glad im not 18 anymore :p
Regarding above, I like you to keep the writing style. Its unique and lovely :) I might be biased because I have talked with my Irish friend a lot in past years, so im sort of "used to it" :D
Maps, if you feel certain location is important to you to let us know where it actually is located at, you can add those, or explain more if certain thing is important to know, regarding to what characters mean. Expesially for us non English native speaking readers, hehe.
just my 2 pennyes.
You have captured the moods anf feelings of your characters well :) Im glad im not 18 anymore :p
Regarding above, I like you to keep the writing style. Its unique and lovely :) I might be biased because I have talked with my Irish friend a lot in past years, so im sort of "used to it" :D
Maps, if you feel certain location is important to you to let us know where it actually is located at, you can add those, or explain more if certain thing is important to know, regarding to what characters mean. Expesially for us non English native speaking readers, hehe.
just my 2 pennyes.
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