I love the inclusion of Irish vocabulary. It makes the story even more immersive. I understand the unique way you use words like sure for example. I can work some of the words out from the context. I love looking up words and phrases I’m not sure about because I always learn something else at the same time.
As for maps they would be helpful for some readers. I’ve spent time on Google maps in street view mode looking at different parts of the world I will likely never see in person and I’ve done that a few times already with your story. I’ve spent time looking at seaside villages in Southern Ireland and clicking around the heart of Dublin.
Your story is so fascinating and beautifully written it’s a pleasure to read it. You my dear are a gem too.❤️