Much Ado About Fangs [COMPLETE 2/24]

"IchigoUsagi;15523339" wrote:
Should I have sent her tiny pictures of pants and cheeseburgers instead?

I love this. It's just one of the most beautiful sentences I've ever seen. It doesn't even need context to be hilarious.

Haha, Byron's insecurities are so much fun to write. Poor, poor Byron...

"pammiechick;15523608" wrote:


Maybe I got lost in the chapters, but why did Bianca visit Graham? It seemed like she gave him fruitcake and left. Was she fulfilling an obligation because he just moved in?

I feel sorry for Lysander but I'm officially Team Bisander at this point...until another ship comes along. I'm not sure if Lysander is in love with Bianca too.

Your writing is so well done! Lots of fun lines--Byron should be jealous of you. Ha! :D

You're exactly right about Bianca fruit-caking and leaving! I was actually wondering if that would be confusing, but she was basically reluctantly playing the role of Welcome Wagon. She's big on appearances and doing everything "properly," regardless of her personal wishes. She also probablyyy secretly wanted to get a look at Graham and show him how well she aged over the centuries, and that she's totally better off without him.

And thank you so much for the compliments! I'm really enjoying my first stab at SimLit, and the community is so welcoming and supportive, even to new people. I never thought I'd be doing this, but I'm so glad I did! I've already met so many great people and am reading really amazing stories.