New Fantasy writing/modelling comp
It was going to be a mid-October launch, but have decided to launch now as it may take some time for people to decide to join and to get judges etc sorted. https://i.imgur.com/6m0241E.png ...
Forum Discussion
@TEXASTWANGTONYA - a few tips, since you have some time on your hands to go through your writing again. ;) <3
You need to be really careful with which synonyms you use, Tonya, they need to be in context. I noticed a few that really didn't fit in with the context in your writing, so I suggest that you go through it again, to get a feel for which words make sense and those that don't so much.
Also consistency, one section you talked about the sun going down and "fire lights guiding our way" then further down you said the sun was just rising. As a group, we actually are leaving as the sun rises (not at night).
If you read my last write up I actually clarified what the balls of fire in the sky were that you referred to in your last write up.
You have plenty of time,so go through your writing again and the best way to work out what makes sense is to either read it aloud yourself or get someone to read it aloud to you.
YAY -- First Time Figuring This OUT.......... With The "Quote" Duhhhh ME
OH Didn't See This POST.............. OK For Sure.........I See What Your Saying.......... Will Edit All Of This & Synonyms Thanks JEN @Jendowoz0612
Wishing Your MOM Well!!!! <3 <3
