Schemes and Dreams
Hey everybody.👋 Welcome to my second story. I'm hard at work on getting things ready for this one. I thought I would go ahead and start the thread and give you an idea what's going on. I'll post occa...
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@DaniRose2143
You are most welcome, reading your stuff is a delight and you deserve to be told. <3
You are most welcome, reading your stuff is a delight and you deserve to be told. <3
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So that's what you've done. :D I'm seriously bad at pinpointing these details... as may be obvious. XD I was suspecting you of having done something with her cheeks, be it sliders or just the darker tone on them, because they always looked kind of really big/round to me. But of course making her mouth bigger takes them in by the sheer power of proportion.
Heheh, yeah. Vlad just doesn't strike me as a scary being, either. I can imagine him being accidentally hilarious or... that sort of evil that is evil but very passive, content to be locked up in his mansion most the time and not taking an interest in the outside world at all. There's so many possible views of vampirism (some of which may coexist as bloodlines in one world)... I guess that's a part of what makes it so interesting to me. And I have to say, seeing what you mean to use them for, you chose a very fitting kind. The openly powerful ones, that are strong and like to flaunt it, make for a scary but relatively short-lived threat. I would be tempted to add a schemer (which is why I suspected Caleb of being one) but you are probably very right not to do it because schemers tend to... linger. XD
So that's what you've done. :D I'm seriously bad at pinpointing these details... as may be obvious. XD I was suspecting you of having done something with her cheeks, be it sliders or just the darker tone on them, because they always looked kind of really big/round to me. But of course making her mouth bigger takes them in by the sheer power of proportion.
Heheh, yeah. Vlad just doesn't strike me as a scary being, either. I can imagine him being accidentally hilarious or... that sort of evil that is evil but very passive, content to be locked up in his mansion most the time and not taking an interest in the outside world at all. There's so many possible views of vampirism (some of which may coexist as bloodlines in one world)... I guess that's a part of what makes it so interesting to me. And I have to say, seeing what you mean to use them for, you chose a very fitting kind. The openly powerful ones, that are strong and like to flaunt it, make for a scary but relatively short-lived threat. I would be tempted to add a schemer (which is why I suspected Caleb of being one) but you are probably very right not to do it because schemers tend to... linger. XD
