Schemes and Dreams
Hey everybody.👋 Welcome to my second story. I'm hard at work on getting things ready for this one. I thought I would go ahead and start the thread and give you an idea what's going on. I'll post occa...
Forum Discussion
@DaniRose2143 At the end of the day, it’s your story and it needs to feel right to you. If something feels off, it’s worth trusting your gut instinct.
Honestly, if you want to explore occults in your game and write a story, why not create a new universe with occults?
Honestly, if you want to explore occults in your game and write a story, why not create a new universe with occults?
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I love everything you have written, but even I wasn’t expecting real vampires in Schemes and Dreams.
Something I realized in my own story was that there are twists that you think are awesome, but it can create confusion when it comes too sudden and with minimal explanation.
I don’t think your approach to introducing vampires was bad or unsustainable… it just happened so sudden and broke some of the expectations that were built up from past chapters.
Something I realized in my own story was that there are twists that you think are awesome, but it can create confusion when it comes too sudden and with minimal explanation.
I don’t think your approach to introducing vampires was bad or unsustainable… it just happened so sudden and broke some of the expectations that were built up from past chapters.
