"LadyLobster;15551557" wrote:
Aww, I really enjoyed the peek at Eli's "normal" family life! And wow, taking Sam to meet his family? Things must be getting serious...I liked how comfortable she seemed with them. I have a feeling Eli meeting her family (and Dad in particular) won't go nearly as smoothly...
I hope his little sister is able to turn things around rather than following in her big brother's footsteps. At least Eli accepts responsibility for his past and genuinely seems to want to change for the better.
Ryha's a brat. LoL. And thanks for the comment. I really enjoyed writing this one with his family. Eli's close to his brother, Anthony and his mother out of all of them, and so I am trying to show that. Hopefully I succeed throughout his generation. As for Sam's dad... yeah, you're just going to have to wait and see.
"kayt45;15551715" wrote:
Aw, that was nice. It's great that you can tell Eli has learned from his mistakes and is ready do more. I hope that what he said has an effect of Rhya so she doesn't end up in the same position.
Eli has learned a lot in life, and I think he has come to terms with who he is and who he wants to be, so yes, he really has learned from his mistakes. Let's just hope his sister takes what he says to heart.
"pammiechick;15551719" wrote:
Wow. That Rhya...she'd better listen to Eli. I like the friendship Eli has with his brother. Things are rosy for the ex-con...now for a meeting with Sam's father. >:)
Eli and his brother are total bros, that's for sure. I cracked myself up writing their scenes. Things are rosy for now, but you know how it goes, Pammie, it's the calm before the storm. LoL.
