rjssim
4 days agoSeasoned Ace
Sim Story Dialogue Style
I was just wondering what people think of writing story dialogue like what I have done below. Is it okay to write a story using this kind of dialogue style?
Robert was walking down the street and ran into Alisa.
Robert
Hey Alisa. What are you up to today?
Alisa
Oh hey, Rob! Not much. I'm thinking of going to the park. Wanna come with me?
Robert
Yeah, sure!
Alisa
Let's go then!
Robert
Okay!
Alisa
Well, you have to move if you want to go, Rob!
Robert
Oh yeah! Right!
Alisa
You silly man! Laughs