The Freezer Bunny Club - A Reading Circle
The Freezer Bunny Club: A Reading Circle https://i.imgur.com/qBYoZ55.png Welcome to The Freezer Bunny Club! This reading circle is an open space for the members to share our stories and discuss...
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@AdamsEve1231 Ah..! Thanks for the reminder about arcs. I was able to track down where I last read in your story.
The 3 chapter sequence was a guide so I don't get overwhelmed. Seems like I didn't need it this time. :smiley:
@Skeilah
Looks like I didn't need my guide after all! :smile:
The 3 chapter sequence was a guide so I don't get overwhelmed. Seems like I didn't need it this time. :smiley:
@Skeilah
Looks like I didn't need my guide after all! :smile:
Spoiler
General
1. What were your first impressions on Liz?
I think she has a confident personality and is opinionated. She loves animals and is good-natured. She’ll be the friend you want, the kind that stands up for you and tell you the truth instead of what you want to hear.
2. What do you think about the concept of my Legacy Challenge? It's not a normal Legacy Challenge but one related to the MySims Trophies.
The legacy challenge that you’re doing is definitely unique to the others. I personally am not a collector so I know I’ll be very entertained following your story since I don’t know much about the trophies.
3. What do you think about the way I write my chapters?
It’s very personal as if you were speaking to your readers. It’s fun to read and encourages banter between writer and reader. I eradicated whims from my game so its intriguing to see it given so much attention. :smile:
Personally when I read legacy challenges, I know that the writer is trying to achieve certain in game goals. Thus I am loving it that you have the goals pinned at the side of your blog so I can reference it all the time.
4. My Chapters are classified in Sim days. Do you (dis)like that?
Its a very clear structure. I’m not too concerned about the nitty gritty of details, as long as I know what to expect structure-wise. (Story-wise, go ahead and surprise me lots!)
Chapters
2. Which parts in the available chapters did you (dis)like? Why is that?
Hm… I think I like moments when they interact with each other, such as dialogues, taking the dog for a walk, or any interaction. It gives me a sneak peak into how they think or what their personalities are.
3. How do you like Ninja and Brent joining the Ridley family? What are your thoughts on these characters?
-I like animals. Watching pet shenanigans are always fun. He was really cute at the beginning so I didn’t expect him to grow into such a huge dog! Still cute though, especially adorable when he followed Liz to the bed and watched her sleep. Aw <3
-I personally don’t give much weight to premade backstories so your sim getting married to Brent is fine with me. It’s a game after all. Brent is endearing because who doesn’t like a man who likes dogs? <3
4. Does everything in the story make sense for you?
Its about a woman who aspires to become a masterchef and we’re following her life’s up and downs as she journeys towards it right? Unless I’m missing something.
5. Is the story easy to follow? Do you need more information or less?
The story is easy to follow. Everything is clear and milestones are available for reference. Writing style is communicative and not complicated. It’s a very relaxing read for me. I
6. What are you expecting for next episodes? (they are already played and written but not yet published but I like to see your thoughts about this)
Hm.. I’m expecting us to get to know the toddler. Liz will be working on her aspirations and Brent will be Brent.
7. Any questions for me?
Is it possible to have a post that outlines everyone’s traits, even ninjas? As a reader I like getting to know the characters and their personalities. :smile:
General
1. What were your first impressions on Liz?
I think she has a confident personality and is opinionated. She loves animals and is good-natured. She’ll be the friend you want, the kind that stands up for you and tell you the truth instead of what you want to hear.
2. What do you think about the concept of my Legacy Challenge? It's not a normal Legacy Challenge but one related to the MySims Trophies.
The legacy challenge that you’re doing is definitely unique to the others. I personally am not a collector so I know I’ll be very entertained following your story since I don’t know much about the trophies.
3. What do you think about the way I write my chapters?
It’s very personal as if you were speaking to your readers. It’s fun to read and encourages banter between writer and reader. I eradicated whims from my game so its intriguing to see it given so much attention. :smile:
Personally when I read legacy challenges, I know that the writer is trying to achieve certain in game goals. Thus I am loving it that you have the goals pinned at the side of your blog so I can reference it all the time.
4. My Chapters are classified in Sim days. Do you (dis)like that?
Its a very clear structure. I’m not too concerned about the nitty gritty of details, as long as I know what to expect structure-wise. (Story-wise, go ahead and surprise me lots!)
Chapters
2. Which parts in the available chapters did you (dis)like? Why is that?
Hm… I think I like moments when they interact with each other, such as dialogues, taking the dog for a walk, or any interaction. It gives me a sneak peak into how they think or what their personalities are.
3. How do you like Ninja and Brent joining the Ridley family? What are your thoughts on these characters?
-I like animals. Watching pet shenanigans are always fun. He was really cute at the beginning so I didn’t expect him to grow into such a huge dog! Still cute though, especially adorable when he followed Liz to the bed and watched her sleep. Aw <3
-I personally don’t give much weight to premade backstories so your sim getting married to Brent is fine with me. It’s a game after all. Brent is endearing because who doesn’t like a man who likes dogs? <3
4. Does everything in the story make sense for you?
Its about a woman who aspires to become a masterchef and we’re following her life’s up and downs as she journeys towards it right? Unless I’m missing something.
5. Is the story easy to follow? Do you need more information or less?
The story is easy to follow. Everything is clear and milestones are available for reference. Writing style is communicative and not complicated. It’s a very relaxing read for me. I
6. What are you expecting for next episodes? (they are already played and written but not yet published but I like to see your thoughts about this)
Hm.. I’m expecting us to get to know the toddler. Liz will be working on her aspirations and Brent will be Brent.
7. Any questions for me?
Is it possible to have a post that outlines everyone’s traits, even ninjas? As a reader I like getting to know the characters and their personalities. :smile:
