The Freezer Bunny Club - A Reading Circle
The Freezer Bunny Club: A Reading Circle https://i.imgur.com/qBYoZ55.png Welcome to The Freezer Bunny Club! This reading circle is an open space for the members to share our stories and discuss...
Forum Discussion
Spoiler
GENERAL
1. What do you think of my storytelling?
I like the way you tell your story. It's short but always to the point and it's clear to understand. That's what I like.
2. What do you think of the overall story so far?
I must say: I had some difficulties in the very beginning. I had to puzzle out the characters and how everyone was connected with each other and that was a lot to take in at first. I even have a note somewhere where everything is puzzled out :P Besides that, once you get the hang of the characters, the story becomes way more fun to read. Maybe you could think about a prologue where you write the backstory? How everything started?
3. What do you think of my ability to portray relationships specifically? Do they feel authentic?
I like how everything and everyone is connected to each other and it sure is authentic. I have a secret love for Hugo (sorry next-door neighbor) so I'm following his story best, and I connect everything back to Hugo for some reason. I also like Max very much and I hope he'll end up on his feet eventually. There's happening so much in this family and I actually know that this could also happen in every family but just slightly different, you know what I mean? That's what makes it real, what makes me want read more, what makes me want to unfold this family. It's like... Almost too realistic for some families, but it's not.
4. What do you think of my new blog? Any feedback?
I already gave my thoughts about your new blog in your thread. I just love the simplicity :) I just wanted to say that again xD
GENERAL
1. What do you think of my storytelling?
I like the way you tell your story. It's short but always to the point and it's clear to understand. That's what I like.
2. What do you think of the overall story so far?
I must say: I had some difficulties in the very beginning. I had to puzzle out the characters and how everyone was connected with each other and that was a lot to take in at first. I even have a note somewhere where everything is puzzled out :P Besides that, once you get the hang of the characters, the story becomes way more fun to read. Maybe you could think about a prologue where you write the backstory? How everything started?
3. What do you think of my ability to portray relationships specifically? Do they feel authentic?
I like how everything and everyone is connected to each other and it sure is authentic. I have a secret love for Hugo (sorry next-door neighbor) so I'm following his story best, and I connect everything back to Hugo for some reason. I also like Max very much and I hope he'll end up on his feet eventually. There's happening so much in this family and I actually know that this could also happen in every family but just slightly different, you know what I mean? That's what makes it real, what makes me want read more, what makes me want to unfold this family. It's like... Almost too realistic for some families, but it's not.
4. What do you think of my new blog? Any feedback?
I already gave my thoughts about your new blog in your thread. I just love the simplicity :) I just wanted to say that again xD
I'll answer the in-depth later this week :)
