The Freezer Bunny Club - A Reading Circle

@Skeilah

I must say: I had some difficulties in the very beginning. I had to puzzle out the characters and how everyone was connected with each other and that was a lot to take in at first. I even have a note somewhere where everything is puzzled out :P Besides that, once you get the hang of the characters, the story becomes way more fun to read. Maybe you could think about a prologue where you write the backstory? How everything started?

A prologue might be hard since I don't have any pictures to put with that. I'd have to replay everything up until that point. If you look at the family tree on the blog, it should all be clear though. Basically everyone you see except Sofia and Nelson are Lucy's and Jacques' kids. Jacques is dead, Lucy isn't. So, the family tree in and of itself is explained. I do get it about the backstory. I don't know exactly how to write that in one clear post since it is so much information without any pictures. Thanks for the feedback anyway. I'll keep it in mind.

I like how everything and everyone is connected to each other and it sure is authentic. I have a secret love for Hugo (sorry next-door neighbor) so I'm following his story best, and I connect everything back to Hugo for some reason. I also like Max very much and I hope he'll end up on his feet eventually. There's happening so much in this family and I actually know that this could also happen in every family but just slightly different, you know what I mean? That's what makes it real, what makes me want read more, what makes me want to unfold this family. It's like... Almost too realistic for some families, but it's not.

It's good to hear you like Max. It's hard to like him very much right now, but you'll get to see some more good from him soon. He's a bit of a grumpy oddball, chanting the fact that he's evil everywhere but he does have a tiny heart somewhere deep down.