The Freezer Bunny Club - A Reading Circle
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Arc 3
Arc 4
Spoiler
I had a bad feeling about Clark, just like Kass. But I think that's mostly because we see things from Kass' perspective.
VJ seems like a good guy. We haven't seen a lot of him, but I feel like he'll treat Andi right.
I have played TSM, but never very much with the Jacoban and Peteran priests, so I didn't know much about those faiths anyway. For me it feels like you've invented some sims religions and I'm fine with that. Can't say much about your take on them.
It did feel realistic. I think it might be one of my favourite conversations so far. My sister is 11 years older than I am, so we were never very close. I've certainly never had those kind of conversations with her, so I can't speak from my own experience but I didn't 'cringe' or anything. Sometimes conversations can feel very forced in stories, so you don't want to read it because something like this would never happen in real life. I don't have that with your story. I feel like the dialogue is realistic and could for sure happen. I could relate to Kass' thoughts about focusing on her studies and not really dating in high school. I did date, but I didn't date anyone inside my own school because that'd have been so awkward when it would have inevitably gone wrong. School always came first though.
Are you referring to the mystery surrounding Clark? Oh man, that was really just the beginning. Mystery after mystery keeps popping up. My poor heart is waiting for revelations. I love it. It keeps up the pace and always makes you wonder about something. This introduction to the mystery of who Clark was made me doubt him just as much as Kass did. So that's a sign of good writing.
a) What are your thoughts about Clark? Thoughts about VJ?
I had a bad feeling about Clark, just like Kass. But I think that's mostly because we see things from Kass' perspective.
VJ seems like a good guy. We haven't seen a lot of him, but I feel like he'll treat Andi right.
b) Andi and Kass discuss faith. What are your thoughts about my take on the Jacoban/Peteran faith from Sims Medieval?
I have played TSM, but never very much with the Jacoban and Peteran priests, so I didn't know much about those faiths anyway. For me it feels like you've invented some sims religions and I'm fine with that. Can't say much about your take on them.
c) Andi and Kass also discuss dating and Kass proceeds to think about her love life. Did it feel realistic?
It did feel realistic. I think it might be one of my favourite conversations so far. My sister is 11 years older than I am, so we were never very close. I've certainly never had those kind of conversations with her, so I can't speak from my own experience but I didn't 'cringe' or anything. Sometimes conversations can feel very forced in stories, so you don't want to read it because something like this would never happen in real life. I don't have that with your story. I feel like the dialogue is realistic and could for sure happen. I could relate to Kass' thoughts about focusing on her studies and not really dating in high school. I did date, but I didn't date anyone inside my own school because that'd have been so awkward when it would have inevitably gone wrong. School always came first though.
d) Also, this arc introduces one of the many mysteries in this story. How do you think I handled its introduction?
Are you referring to the mystery surrounding Clark? Oh man, that was really just the beginning. Mystery after mystery keeps popping up. My poor heart is waiting for revelations. I love it. It keeps up the pace and always makes you wonder about something. This introduction to the mystery of who Clark was made me doubt him just as much as Kass did. So that's a sign of good writing.
Arc 4
Spoiler
YES. My opinion of Davis is coloured in by what I've seen of him in future arcs but I adore Davis. I wasn't so sure of him at first, but he turned out to be such a fun character. I hope Kass will stick with him (and not Gage). I like stepping out of Kass' head and seeing the situation from someone else's perspective and Davis' interlude did that. It made me like him more. Gage's interlude did the same thing, although I don't like Gage as much.
What are your thoughts about Davis? Did you like his interlude?
YES. My opinion of Davis is coloured in by what I've seen of him in future arcs but I adore Davis. I wasn't so sure of him at first, but he turned out to be such a fun character. I hope Kass will stick with him (and not Gage). I like stepping out of Kass' head and seeing the situation from someone else's perspective and Davis' interlude did that. It made me like him more. Gage's interlude did the same thing, although I don't like Gage as much.
