Under The Tartosan Sun
Table of contents: [ Spoiler ] Since this story has grown so much bigger than I ever imagined I feel like its time to borrow a page from some of my favorite SimLit writers and offer you a syn...
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FWIW I liked both versions.
What the new version has going for it, is a lot of genuine storytelling about the relationship between a mom and her grown daughter. My mom has been through some things, and I truly treasure my relationship with her. And I'm closer to having a grown daughter than I care to admit most of the time. I recognized a lot of really true and lovely stuff in your new Izabella story.
I'm sorry if my story's chapter having to do with assault (or just really poor communication, depending on how you look at it) prompted you to take yours in a direction that ultimately didn't fit.
What the new version has going for it, is a lot of genuine storytelling about the relationship between a mom and her grown daughter. My mom has been through some things, and I truly treasure my relationship with her. And I'm closer to having a grown daughter than I care to admit most of the time. I recognized a lot of really true and lovely stuff in your new Izabella story.
I'm sorry if my story's chapter having to do with assault (or just really poor communication, depending on how you look at it) prompted you to take yours in a direction that ultimately didn't fit.
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