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orenjiAi15
5 years agoSeasoned Ace
"mercuryfoam;c-17682071" wrote:
How'd he build a hut though? Has that much time passed?
Lol I knew someone would point out the plot holes eventually! Thanks @mercuryfoam for the questions! But I wanted to answer some of them coz I get to share my creative process :D
Fun fact, Unloved 4 (Encounter) was supposed to be the original Ep3 (hence why it came out waayyy faster than the published Ep3 "Good News") but it had this massive plot hole of Adriel travelling to Capeside and building his home in an unbelievably short time. I originally penned a filler episode where Elia tries to explore the chateau in the storm (picking up from Ep2)--an artifact of which can still be read on this line:
"orenjiAi;c-17680970" wrote:
“That house is haunted I tell you! Besides, I don’t have anything else to do there. The rooms are locked, the TV reception’s bad, and I’m still figuring out how to use this thing you gave me.” Elia said as she brandished her phone.
But I scrapped it in favor of Robert's flashback. Which I believe is better since now, 1) it would make more sense to the reader why he's so uptight and 2) it serves as a premise for the Whittaker kid's introduction down the plot.
To answer the time problem, (since I'm not gonna be writing in the answers in an episode anyway), Elia has been at Capeside for give-or-take 3 days already before the village tour episode (lemme check: her first day being the morning after adoption, second is the scrapped house exploration; and another too mundane to write). Adriel arrived* at Capeside on the morning of the 3rd day which gives him just "enough" time to upset Robert with this hut. There are actually two things "wrong" with the house.
*no spoilers please
P.S. I call them "episodes" (instead of chapters) because the details in the visuals actually form part of the story very much like a movie's. Watch out for more of them in the next ?