Vampire Kisses

"ArcherDK;c-17462624" wrote:
Just finished reading the new chapter on your blog. An excellent and long-awaited update. I greatly enjoyed your image work and character designs. The mansion is also great. Fantastic work.

On the negative - I understand that Raven is very happy to be in these kind of places and she is eager to describe her feelings, but it's just a tad too much. In addition, it makes her look a bit childish. I get it - she is young and the place is her "Barbie doll house", but it doesn't do her any foresees as a character. not it such quantities, at least. Her emotions are shown very well in your picture work and that is more than sufficient in my opinion.

Other than that - fantastic update, thoroughly enjoyed reading. :)

Thank you so much for taking time to read it and give me feedback, I deeply appreciate it o:)

I considered the way a child of 12 would think and behave with as much confidence as Raven's, observing my son's behavior who's almost 11, also based on the book's description of Raven. You're very right, she is very childish in every way when it comes to her 'goth barbie mansion' :#

*Hint ;) * Her character builds up to the kind of - damnn girl good for you! - as the story progresses.

I will definitely look into better positions or facial expressions for the scenes. I spend a few days on average to look for one scene's pose and trying out cas animations :D

Thank you @ArcherDK