1. What's been a favourite moment so far?
I think my favorite moment is a tie. I really liked when Molpe first approached Septimus about him being the one to help her have a child. He was just so gentle and sweet! I also really loved when Molpe and Otrere played in the fountain!
2. Anything you'd like to see in the future?
I'd really love to see more on Molpe's childhood. It seems like her mother was an interesting character. I'd be curious to see how Molpe turned out so kind when her mother was so strict.
3. Do you think Molpe is a good leader?
I think so! She cares for her people, but maybe even too much. Spending too much time moping after the death of a slave, while understandable, makes her seem too soft. At the same time, I kind of like that. It provides room for character development.
4. Do you have a favourite character?
I really love Otrere. She is absolutely beautiful, and very sweet.
5. Was there anything you would have changed?
No! I think the story is progressing nicely!
6. Any helpful critique?
While I was looking through your screenshots I noticed that sometimes (rarely) the walls on the buildings in the background weren't all the way up. You couldn't see the roof on them. Like walls were up, but you hadn't gone up all the floors, if that makes sense. It's just a little thing, but it can make a big difference!
Overall, I'm really enjoying this story! Solid characters with realistic motives, and a believable universe. I'm excited to see where you take things!
