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SweetieWright_84
3 years agoSeasoned Ace
I'm no literary expert, not even someone who reads on a regular basis, and I think you did fine introducing spellcasters.
It makes sense to me why Jamie would choose that path. He's already lost his sister. He feels powerless. The way I see it, he feels like this is one chance to take control of a situation that might otherwise be out of his control. Becoming a doctor would take too long.
As for the selfie part, it made me lol. It does seem like a "typical teen" thing to do. It also helps to remind the reader that he is in fact a teen. When you remember that fact, you realize even more the struggles he's been through in his short life.
It makes sense to me why Jamie would choose that path. He's already lost his sister. He feels powerless. The way I see it, he feels like this is one chance to take control of a situation that might otherwise be out of his control. Becoming a doctor would take too long.
As for the selfie part, it made me lol. It does seem like a "typical teen" thing to do. It also helps to remind the reader that he is in fact a teen. When you remember that fact, you realize even more the struggles he's been through in his short life.