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CathyTea
10 years agoLegend
"InfraGreen;14329104" wrote:
I told myself that I could excise all of the "mundane" chapters from my story, but I'll admit, a lot of my chapters first come to my mind with a simple event I want to happen, and weaving into everything else that is happening in the story. Though my favorites start out with thinking of a mundane event, but adding something gross and/or intense for the sake of contrast. Renew wedding vows after your friend kills himself, get assaulted at a normal funeral, putting undertones of child abuse in a chapter about kids running away, almost getting shot when going out for cookies, etc.
But anyways, unless your story is entirely event-driven, I think those moments need to happen. At least I have trouble making character introspection happen at intense times. Closest is that they happen at quiet times right before the storm. I think that SimLit has helped me appreciate those moments in other media too. Nothing wrong with taking a breath.
I've got to tell you... you know what I read your fiction for, Green? For your treatment of the mundane! I just adore the way that your fringe characters strive to settle into "normal mainstream life." There's always a twist... but something makes me absurdly happy to see Annette holding her baby on her hip making an apple pie! Heavenly happy!