"jman1234;c-2102535" wrote:
Ichiraikou, can you review the kit that I made for Ahsoka? You seem to be an expert in this.
Also, I see no problem with giving both of them the title of Commander. Maybe both the new Rex and Ahsoka can have the same leadership name (like how Echo and Fives both have a unique called Domino Squad), and could lead to a new mechanic in the game where teams can swap leaders during battle?
I can review you kit idea. No problem. But as to the entire commander or Advisor thing. There really isn't a debate. The game follows the cannon as much as it can. So even if the clones still referred to her as commander, they wont put that in an ability the way is done here. They might put it as a special as a nice reference thou, but never a lead or unique. That will always be Advisor, since that was her official position.
Anyway, onto the kit idea:
"jman1234;c-2101869" wrote:
Advancing Slashes (Basic): Deal Physical Damage to target enemy and gain Foresight for 2 turns. On a critical hit, Ahsoka Tano gains +5% offense (stacking).
Overall a nice idea, except for the foresight. Ahsoka can already have damage immunity, which prevents all damage and thus makes the foresight useless (this is less of a problem in the original since damage immunity is much less frequent there). I would suggest something like this: Deal Physical damage tot target enemy. If Ahsoka has damage immunity, grant Foresight for 2 turns to a random other Galactic Republic ally that doesn't have it yet. Otherwise she gains Foresight for 2 turns.
otherwise it's fine.
"jman1234;c-2101869" wrote:
(Special 1) : All allies debuffs are cleansed and gain Offense Up, Critical Chance Up, Critical Damage Up, and Advantage until the end of their turn. If the allies are Galactic Republic, they are also called to assist.
The buffs are overkill. She already grans offence Crit chance and crit damage in her lead, and has stacking offence in her basic. This is jst stacking the same thing on top of the same thing. Not to mention the efeftc in the lead these grant makes no sense with those buffs. But we'll go more into it there. I suggest doing something else than these buffs here.
"jman1234;c-2101869" wrote:
(Leadership) : All allies have +30% Offense, Critical Chance, and Critical Damage. If a Galactic Republic ally lands or is hit with a critical hit, target ally gains Critical Damage Immunity for one turn and 10% turn meter. If a Galactic Republic ally has Offense Up, Critical Chance Up, or Critical Damage Up, they cannot gain negative status effects.
While Ahsoka is in the leader slot and all other Galactic Republic allies are active:
- Ahsoka has damage immunity which cannot be copied or dispelled
- Enemies cannot gain Critical Damage Immunity
Lets continue first with the crit and offene up buffs. Why? This lead doesn't grant those buffs or mentions them otherwise in any way? Why not have allies be immune when they have Damage or Crit immunity, which are 2 buffs this lead works with?
Another thing is the damage immunty expire effect. as in, there is none. Yes I know it's in the unique, but that makes no sense. What if she's not in the lead position? Then there is just a random mention of damage immunity in there for nothing. She gains the Damage immunity through the lead, so she should lose it through he lead.
What you can do in the unique is make the expire condition for damage immunity the same as the bonuses condition. This is what GAS does with his lead and unique. So check that one out for reference.
For the lead, I suggest this:
All allies have +30% Offense, Critical Chance, and Critical Damage. In addition, all enemies can't gain Critical Hit Immunity. Whenever a Galactic Republic ally scores or suffers a Critical Hit, they gain Critical Hit immunity for 1 turn and 15% Turn Meter. At the start of each turn, Galactic Republic allies with Damage Immunity or Critical Hit immunity are immune to debuffs until the end of that turn.
While there are other active Galactic Republic allies, Ahsoka:
- Has Damage Immunity, which can't be Copied, Prevented, or Dispelled.
- Loses Damage Immunity when all other Galactic Republic allies are defeated.
"jman1234;c-2101869" wrote:
(Unique) :
Whenever Ahsoka uses her basic ability, one random Galactic Republic ally will be called to assist dealing 40% more damage and regenerates 7.5% of Ahsoka's Health and Protection.
When all Galactic Republic allies have been defeated, Ahsoka drops her damage immunity as well as removes all negative status effects and gains 100% Health and Protection, 50% Critical Chance and Critical Damage, retribution which cannot be dispelled, and is immune to all negative status effects.
Already mentioned the damage immunity thing, so lets focus on other aspects. I got to admit, this really feels like a mini GAS kit, which makes sense and is kinda fun to do. But if you're gonna do it, do it right. There is already immunity to debuffs in the lead, so the one here is overkill and unnecessary. Not to mention she already has Critical Chance and damage in her lead. So those here are overkill as well. Another thing I don't like is the stacking offence on her basic. In that, she already has damage immunity, so gaining Crtit Immunity through scoring a critical hit seems pointless, yet she needs those to stack her offence. personally I would change that, but that s me. And I would do it here. This is what I would suggest:
When Ahsoka uses her basic ability during her turn, she calls another random Galactic Republic ally to assist. Whenever a Galactic Republic ally attacks out of turn, they recover Health and Protection equal to 5% of Ahsoka's Max Health and Protection, and Ahsoka gains +5% Offence (stacking) until the end of the encounter.
If all allies are Galactic Republic at the start of the battle:
- Ahsoka has +50% Max Health and Protection.
- Ahsoka deals double damage, but can't score Critical Hits while any other allies are active.
- When all other allies are defeated, Ahsoka gains +100% Counter Chance and +35% Speed, and all enemies have their Critical Avoidance set to 0.
Well, that's my full feedback anyway, hope it helped @jman1234