Much better! Great improvement, and good job. This video i could watch half of it. I hate to be the critic, but i like what your doing with these videos. Here are todays issues (again, this is just my perspective as a viewer, watching for the entertainment value).
1. With the music removed (big improvement), i can hear you a lot better. However, the sound (the background effects of ships landing or whatever) still prevent me from hearing what you're saying a lot of the time. Go ahead and turn the volume halfway down or more. On my end, i can then adjust the volume to suit me.
2. Consider breaking the video into segments. They are really long, and the included editing tools from youtube make splitting videos easy. Maybe have a GW video, an Arena video, and a farming stuff video. You would just need to play these areas all at once when you record your master video. If you hope to get revenue from your videos then this could easily convert 1 viewer of 1 video into 3 views of 3 videos. Plus, for me, thw viewer, i dont have to play fastforward/rewind to get to the parts that interest me (which can be hard to do on a small screen phone qhen the video is over an hour (requires too fine of adjustments)).
3. Do a little research on character names and their correct pronunciation.
4. Plan out a few core thoughts that you want to speak about (just think about them for a moment or write them down as bullets beforw recording). This would help the viewer follow the random bursts of infoemation that you obviously understand, but the viewer is just trying to follow along.
Really good job today. Massive improvement. Thanks for the video!
