magician1 wrote:
happyone2009 wrote:
Well, I just uploaded my house last night and I would love some input. Don't worry about hurting my feelings, I can take anything lol. This is my 3rd house I've built and I know its not the best but if you look at my first house its improved alot since then, or at least thats what I like to think lol. So, please just give me your honest feedback. :)
Heres the house: http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=1479072
Heres the story: http://www.thesims3.com/contentDetail.html?contentId=121753
Welcome and thank you for sharing your house with us.
I've downloaded your house and will go and play it. Comments will follow after that.
Thank you
I have played your house and have the following comments: (It may seem like a lot but it is small things)
I see a lot of potential in u'r build and style. I think u will become a very good if not great builder.
But: The Pond needs Terrain paint, sand/rock/dark soil, as well as the flower beds,
Lights would've been nice at both outer doors on the outside,
Dustbin placement, (simple as it sounds) does play a role in the downloading of lots,hide it around a corner or make a little recess/alcove for it.
The Study: there's a light in the doorway on the outside and the computer on the left is not usable.
The nursery: The Green cot pattern looks a bit out of sync with the rest of the room.
Main Br: The curtains are facing the wrong way and the 2 Glass single doors leading to the gym and kitchen's side ???? I think it is not a bedroom feature to have a glass door leading out of your bedroom into the house.
Main Bathroom: Just needs a loose rug a plant or 2 and maybe even a portrait.
Roof: When u'r roof tiles are not in sight, I see a lot of different color paints in the Triangle walls of the roof. Just check this after you've put your roofs up.
Spot lights in garden could maybe be moved to be on the little fence you've got on the Pathway.
General: A very nice layout, good furniture placement overall, nice landscaping (Floral) and a rec from me.
BTW: I think for only u'r 3 rd house you did a great job. Just pay a little attention to detail and you will be a great builder sooner rather than later.
I hope you take this advice as advice and not something negative.
Thank you
