@DivaDoodle No, no, no!
Not in a million years I want you to think bad about your story and that you feel bad about my comments!!!
Maybe I (I can´t speak for @bekkasan of course) read too much into your story!
That is my fault, I am a German teacher who has learned in her studies that every text has to be read between the lines and has to be interpreted and such!
Your story is so good and captivating that maybe I interpreted too much into everything!!!! That is a bad habit I have!
So I am sorry if I hurt your feelings, THAT WAS NOT MY INTENTION AT ALL!!!!!! :'(
Comments on your new update tomorrow, it´s a quater to 4 here and I have to go to sleep now.