@Belalucina Really enjoyed this story! As for story telling, just do what you feel comfortable with. The main thing is to enjoy playing and sharing your gameplay. There are many ways to tell a story, whether the pictures match the text or not, or whether there is any story text (as in writing what the sims say) or not. Either way, it's still a story. :) just enjoy it, and your readers (including myself) will too! Maybe try out some different ways of writing it, and see which way you like best.
Also, hopefully someone who isn't so rude will want to buy the foal. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next!
