It started feeling more commentary-style than story-style if ykwim. Usually, I see a pic, hear the story, keep writing the dialogue, find another pic that works, write more, scene. begin again. etc. The fact that it wasn't happening for those chapters drove me nuts. Don't get me wrong, there's nothing wrong with commentary-style. I do that for my wishacy. And frequently, things start like that, but this is an evolved story. I had higher hopes for myself.
Graham thanks you for liking the name Emily. Maybe he'll convince Brielle.
I finally got a solid idea for gen 2, and it's just plain evil. >:)
