Metro: A San Myshuno Drama (UPDATE:The END)
https://metrosimlit.wordpress.com/ http://i1140.photobucket.com/albums/n572/acar7/09-06-17_2-02-59AM_zpsmziatmao.png This is the story about twelve young adults trying to get by in the city o...
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I like this idea! :) Thanks @candycottonchu
I try to every now and then, but the way I write my story is supposed to more like a screenplay. That's why the story has "seasons" rather than books. For me I like to tell most of my story through pictures and dialogue that goes with it. I guess it also has to do with the fact that I'm not that great with writing in that form....I guess you could call it book form? I can never think of enough descriptive terms and it would also get confusing since I have so many characters. It's easier to keep track of who's talking with the screenplay format.
If you liked the manga, you should definitely watch the anime! I think all the episodes are on youtube.
And yes i did get inspiration from it xD. I just love that show so much!
I think I deleted the first version of the story. I actually published five chapters, but I just wasn't feeling it. I somehow made it where all the characters had tattoos and unrealistic jobs/apartments LOL. So I deleted everything and started fresh.....and I am really glad I did! Same with season 2 (I hope this version is better :D )
I do have old "promotional" screenshots (like the picture on the first post of this thread) and it has some different characters lol
3. Any constructive criticism?
Have you ever considered adding more narrative to the dialogue? As in describing feelings of the POV character, gestures and mimics? It's just a suggestion.
I try to every now and then, but the way I write my story is supposed to more like a screenplay. That's why the story has "seasons" rather than books. For me I like to tell most of my story through pictures and dialogue that goes with it. I guess it also has to do with the fact that I'm not that great with writing in that form....I guess you could call it book form? I can never think of enough descriptive terms and it would also get confusing since I have so many characters. It's easier to keep track of who's talking with the screenplay format.
btw I did read quite a big chunk of NANA back then when it was still running and I also really liked it! But I never finished it, bc it took so long until a new book came out, that I simply forgot about it.
I admit Ren's band reminded me a lot of it! Did you take the name inspiration too?
If you liked the manga, you should definitely watch the anime! I think all the episodes are on youtube.
And yes i did get inspiration from it xD. I just love that show so much!
I would really like it if you would share some of your old screenshots! I think I completely missed the first version of the story.
I think I deleted the first version of the story. I actually published five chapters, but I just wasn't feeling it. I somehow made it where all the characters had tattoos and unrealistic jobs/apartments LOL. So I deleted everything and started fresh.....and I am really glad I did! Same with season 2 (I hope this version is better :D )
I do have old "promotional" screenshots (like the picture on the first post of this thread) and it has some different characters lol
