Novel Idea! Reading Circle B
We are just one of the many Reading Circle's brainstormed by the wonderful and fantastic @CathyTea The purpose of these groups is to encourage fellow writers and provide a loyal base of readers an...
Forum Discussion
The Making of a Princess: A Selection Challenge
By @KaMiojo
1. What is your overall opinion on the story? What made it unique and what spoke to you most?
First off I had to applaud you for playing with so many sims at one time! I don't know how you do it and do it so effortlessly. This story is great. I'm so used bachelor type challenges that are disney based so it's nice to read one with original characters. I loved that you had people submit your girls, I'm sad I missed out on that. That's what I think makes it so unique!
2. Do you have any favourite character? If so what makes that character your favourite? And do you have any characters you dislike, why?
I've said it in the comments and I'll say it here I love Autumn. I'm very worried she's not going to last though. The prince had a good time on their date but I feel like he connected more with some of the other ladies. I really like Ming too!
I don't like Valentina but I don't think you're supposed to like her lol
3. Any favourite situations? Funny/emotional/sweet/special moments?
I had a good chuckle when the reporter got abducted. I'm guessing that happened in your game at random and you just went with it. I love that you made it part of your story instead of rescreenshoting it.
4. Do you have any constructive criticism?
The only thing I would suggest is maybe having a sheet with all the girls still in the competition and x's on those elminated at the beginning of each update. There's are so many girls I sometimes forgot who's still there. But otherwise really a lovely job! You got me interested in reading the books it's based on.
The Heffner Legacy
Forum Thread/Comments
By @Maladi777
1. What is your overall opinion on the story? What made it unique and what spoke to you most?
At first this was just a normal legacy, it was good and well written but just seemed to follow the family. But that's pretty standard in the first generation. But then Tony happened and it was like the best soap opera I've ever read. I loved every bit of it. I want to find my own Tony in real life, well minus the killing.
2. Do you have any favourite character? If so what makes that character your favourite? And do you have any characters you dislike, why?
Ummm let me think about this.....TONY! I love him and Beryl (by the way love the name of Beryl, she was the bad guy in Sailormoon). I'm really hoping they find each other in the end. But I have to admit I was not happy when Tony went back to his bad ways and was stalking and killing some of her boyfriends. I also liked Bao. I loved the honest conversation he had with his date about being gay.
I don't like Kristi but I don't think we'l be seeing more of her but I could be wrong. Kellie and Max should be together or Kellie and Thomas, I like her with both guys.
3. Any favourite situations? Funny/emotional/sweet/special moments?
The whole scene with Beryl and Tony after they rescued Brian. You could see how much they cared for each other but weren't sure how the other felt. Him watching her sleep on the couch was so sweet.
4. Do you have any constructive criticism?
Just keep pushing the envelope with the situations your characters get into. It's really working for you!
By @KaMiojo
1. What is your overall opinion on the story? What made it unique and what spoke to you most?
First off I had to applaud you for playing with so many sims at one time! I don't know how you do it and do it so effortlessly. This story is great. I'm so used bachelor type challenges that are disney based so it's nice to read one with original characters. I loved that you had people submit your girls, I'm sad I missed out on that. That's what I think makes it so unique!
2. Do you have any favourite character? If so what makes that character your favourite? And do you have any characters you dislike, why?
I've said it in the comments and I'll say it here I love Autumn. I'm very worried she's not going to last though. The prince had a good time on their date but I feel like he connected more with some of the other ladies. I really like Ming too!
I don't like Valentina but I don't think you're supposed to like her lol
3. Any favourite situations? Funny/emotional/sweet/special moments?
I had a good chuckle when the reporter got abducted. I'm guessing that happened in your game at random and you just went with it. I love that you made it part of your story instead of rescreenshoting it.
4. Do you have any constructive criticism?
The only thing I would suggest is maybe having a sheet with all the girls still in the competition and x's on those elminated at the beginning of each update. There's are so many girls I sometimes forgot who's still there. But otherwise really a lovely job! You got me interested in reading the books it's based on.
The Heffner Legacy
Forum Thread/Comments
By @Maladi777
1. What is your overall opinion on the story? What made it unique and what spoke to you most?
At first this was just a normal legacy, it was good and well written but just seemed to follow the family. But that's pretty standard in the first generation. But then Tony happened and it was like the best soap opera I've ever read. I loved every bit of it. I want to find my own Tony in real life, well minus the killing.
2. Do you have any favourite character? If so what makes that character your favourite? And do you have any characters you dislike, why?
Ummm let me think about this.....TONY! I love him and Beryl (by the way love the name of Beryl, she was the bad guy in Sailormoon). I'm really hoping they find each other in the end. But I have to admit I was not happy when Tony went back to his bad ways and was stalking and killing some of her boyfriends. I also liked Bao. I loved the honest conversation he had with his date about being gay.
I don't like Kristi but I don't think we'l be seeing more of her but I could be wrong. Kellie and Max should be together or Kellie and Thomas, I like her with both guys.
3. Any favourite situations? Funny/emotional/sweet/special moments?
The whole scene with Beryl and Tony after they rescued Brian. You could see how much they cared for each other but weren't sure how the other felt. Him watching her sleep on the couch was so sweet.
4. Do you have any constructive criticism?
Just keep pushing the envelope with the situations your characters get into. It's really working for you!
