The Freezer Bunny Club - A Reading Circle

General
What do you think about Morgana’s kid chapters and the epilogue to the first “act”?
I did love Morgana as a kid and still now that she grew up. She’s so beautifullll! Anyways, I really like where the story is going with Morgana being Morgana. Okay, it’s a little sad, given that she silently broke with her dad, but it’s part of the story and it’s soooo strong.

By ‘act’, do you mean the bar and the fight and a facepalming Lancelot? xD Ahhhh I’m already in love with Lancelot for no particular reason. And Gawain has a really short temper indeed, just as Elyan. They are a funny group of knights. I forget someone. Percival. He didn’t make much of an impression on me yet, but he’s welcome to join the fun knight group.

What do you think about the second act so far?
Is the second ‘act’ when the knights and Arthur go on the horses (how are there horses in the game?!), where Emrys (*cough* MERLIN *cough*) appears and the druids and so on? I LOVED IT. FINALLY. MERLIN. That was the only thing I cared about hahehehehehe. Oh no, I also really liked how Arthur handled the situation. You’re a good guy, Arthur. Don’t listen to what your dad is saying. You’re a good guy and you did the right thing. Pass that on to him. I really hope he stays this way, because Morgana already lost her fate in her dad. She needs Arthur.

What are your thoughts on the tone of the story? It’s meant to gradually get darker as people grow older. Can you feel this? Are there enough warm/light-hearted moments to balance the darker ones?
You can call it ‘darker’ but I call it ‘more exiting to read’. It’s indeed good balanced and that’s also really good! I’m glued onto the story so I have nothing really more to say besides you’re doing a great job.

What do you think about the druids?
I LOVE THEM and I’m absolutely against the King right there because he wants to kill them all. I really hope they’re going to be alright and I want to see more of them!

Characters
Did the main cast grow up the way you thought they would? Do the types of people they grew into make sense?
I think almost everyone in your banner is making sense now to me. Only that blonde guy and the girl in the right corner… But maybe I just missed them somewhere xD I just love how Gawain, Lancelot and Elyan are together on that picture like ‘eujjjj we’re best friends’ because that’s exactly how I see them xD I think I found two new favorite characters (Gawain already was one of them).

Everything makes a lot of sense. Just to make sure I don’t forget to answer that question.

What do you think about the supporting knights? Elyan, Percival and Lancelot?
Heheheheeh I already answered that xD I LOOOOOVE Elyan and Lancelot. Percival didn’t have much of an impression on me but I actually think he’s the backstabber of the group while Elyan and Lancelot would be more… On Arthur’s side? But that’s just my impression.

Is Arthur’s authority over them believable? What do you think about the dynamic there?
I don’t think I get this question, sorry. Can you maybe specify this one?

What do you think about Guinevere and Sarah? Is Morgana’s relationship with them believable?
Guinevere is new, right? I’ve never seen her before. I love how Morgana can talk to them on a little more non-formal way. Like, she tries to be formal but you can smell a sense of friendliness. That’s really nice. I hope this goes on.

What are your thoughts on Morgana’s relationship with Richard?
I DON’T LIKE RICHARD. I don’t know why but I just don’t like him so I don’t pay any attention to him xD That’s why I can’t really answer this question. It’s… complicated xD

What do you think about Emrys?
*cough* Merlin *cough*. I love Emrys’ appearance in the story and I hope to see more of him and his folks. I loved every bit of them all.

Is there someone you would like to see more of in future chapters? Backstories explored? Extra attention given? On the flipside, is there someone in the story that you don’t care for, and would rather see gone?
EMRYS FOR SURE, together with his folks and how he got there. Also Lancelot would be funny, or Elyan. Kid background stories or something. YEAH.

Plot
This one is a bit different from the rest. I’m interested to know what readers would have done, had they been in the character’s shoes during big moments. If you were the character, what would you have done:
• As Morgana, when she found out about May Day?
Morgana still thinks she was born on the 1st of June, right? Anyways, I don’t think if I could even stand after reading such a horrifying thing. I would just be like ‘oh lord, I need to sit down’ and think about what I just had read. Or maybe I had the courage to go out of there as soon as I could so I could fall in my bed and then think about what I just had read.

• As Arthur, when he was faced with the druid magic dilemma?
The same as Arthur, but not without hestitation. My head would not be spinning like his and I would not be exhausted. But well, maybe I would be if I really was an heir in that situation.

Writing
In chapter 2.3 and onward, I increased the size of the text compared to the pictures. Did you notice? Is it good that it’s bigger?
I thought I noticed something like that, but I wasn’t sure! I like it^^

I try to hint at world lore here and there, for example with the dragons and the druid oath. Do you like this? Should I do it more often?
Yeah, I like those things! Please, go on with it :)

Pictures
I try to show people’s varying mental states by showing or hiding the “light” in their eyes. Gawain has it all the time, Arthur has it about half the chapters, and Morgana rarely shows it. Was this noticeable for you?
Ehhhhhhhh….. *goes back to the story to look at peoples eyes* Is everyone having the same eye color or something???? XDDDD

Okay, I see it, but I didn’t notice it before. I’ll only notice it from now on because you told me about it xD I loved it when I finally saw it in Morgana’s eyes when she was with Arthur <3

Do you think that my pictures have improved compared to the kid chapters, or worsened? Is there anything you dislike or found jarring?
I think they are as perfect as they were at first. Have a little faith in your pictures. They’re great! Fantastic! Awesome!

Questions
I had a lot of fun having the cast answer your questions last time. So, for the people who want to – feel free to ask questions again! I’m limiting you guys to 5 questions maximum, though. Also, Richard and Emrys will not be answering any of them.

>>> I really have no inspiration for this thing ;----;