"luciusstorm;c-18216126" wrote:
@DaniRose2143, you do you. I'm sure it will be interesting however you choose to play it.
I decided to put it back in.? I got so caught up in visualizing their meeting happening in the club that instead of thinking of ways to write it and having it happen in Mimi's apartment I forced the story down this path. Their confrontation has always been planned for the second chapter so I'll stick with that. What becomes of Nancy and Malcolm after that...I don't have a clue. I never thought that far ahead with them. I may end up having to put some of the minor characters like Holly and Bristol, Tianna and Harley on hold and figure out how to work them and the Landgraab's in.
It's a valuable lesson, I need to stop second guessing and looking for perfection and just embrace the mistake and see where it goes. And plan better.?