Schemes and Dreams
Hey everybody.👋 Welcome to my second story. I'm hard at work on getting things ready for this one. I thought I would go ahead and start the thread and give you an idea what's going on. I'll post occa...
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Whoa! I'm getting used to things being top-notch in everything you write, but still, this was amazing. All the interiors, the way it really looked like they moved from a humbler house to a full out mansion, the clothes of course... and that grin on Lilith just put a cherry on top. Way to drive the point home. :D Lilith in general looks much better than she usually does. Maybe it's just the lack of her unfortunate fringe, but more likely you did some seriously good job with her makeup, too.
Anyway, lady Elle is obviously the real queen of this place... though I do wonder about the dreams Rayvn had even before going to the village. That sounded like something a vampire would do... which makes me wonder if perhaps Caleb isn't more modern-world savvy than the rest of them. Sometimes the silent types in the shadows are the more dangerous ones. Still, I feel like Elle is right to be cautious about possible trouble. Fate is probably against her when it comes to these two would-be "pets"... Well, no one can escape change forever, I don't think.
Anyway, lady Elle is obviously the real queen of this place... though I do wonder about the dreams Rayvn had even before going to the village. That sounded like something a vampire would do... which makes me wonder if perhaps Caleb isn't more modern-world savvy than the rest of them. Sometimes the silent types in the shadows are the more dangerous ones. Still, I feel like Elle is right to be cautious about possible trouble. Fate is probably against her when it comes to these two would-be "pets"... Well, no one can escape change forever, I don't think.
