Hey everybody.đ Welcome to my second story. I'm hard at work on getting things ready for this one. I thought I would go ahead and start the thread and give you an idea what's going on. I'll post occasional updates in here but most will be in the "What Happened In Your Game Today" thread for now.
With the cast pretty much done I'm down to working on the hard part, lots. I don't want any of the main cast to be homeless, but Del Sol Valley is sooo tiny. I'm adding San Myshuno and Oasis Springs to DSV to form a sort of Sims SoCal. DSV stands in as a Sims Hollywood and Malibu. San Myshuno is downtown. Oasis Springs is a Palm Springs like resort where the stars will get away for relaxation and such. I'm looking for either a weather mod to make San My like DSV or I will just turn off snow and weather effects and hope that I don't have lots of sims running around dressed for winter.
I'm hoping to have the first chapter done and posted by the end of the month. I really hope this story will live up to your expectations.
@DaniRose2143 Thank you kindly for noticing my absence and your sweet words.
This is a great story! Love this last installment. I have totally enjoyed Tartosan Sun but I think I enjoy the slightly darker side of this story even more. I know you said it's been tough to write a certain amount of "edge" but I don't find it too horribly dark. I'm looking forward to the next two bits!
@GirafHuntr I'm thrilled knowing you are ok. When someone who comments as regularly as you did 'disappears' I can't help it, I find myself hoping and praying that they are safe and happy. If my storytelling 'lost' them, I can live with that. I love my readers and I love knowing they're safe and ok whether or not they still enjoy my stories.
The happy feel good vibe of Tartosan Sun is a reflection of me. I am a girly-girl and I own it, but you didn't hurt my feelings by saying you like this story more. I love this story for taking me outside of my comfort zone and allowing me a way to explore and express different storytelling themes. I know that what speaks most to my heart isn't for everyone, but I embrace the journey this story has opened. I love redemption stories and I think that's why Anna has stolen my heart. It's hard to imagine someone who has been through more, and lost more than her and yet she never lost sight of who she is and wants to be. There will be drama and friction ahead. How in the world do you gloss over what just happened and how do you explain how this woman suddenly appeared in the world? She has made connection with Ray and Judith in such a short time, but we haven't seen that connection play out yet.
"DaniRose2143;c-18265850" wrote: @GirafHuntr I'm thrilled knowing you are ok. When someone who comments as regularly as you did 'disappears' I can't help it, I find myself hoping and praying that they are safe and happy. If my storytelling 'lost' them, I can live with that. I love my readers and I love knowing they're safe and ok whether or not they still enjoy my stories.
The happy feel good vibe of Tartosan Sun is a reflection of me. I am a girly-girl and I own it, but you didn't hurt my feelings by saying you like this story more. I love this story for taking me outside of my comfort zone and allowing me a way to explore and express different storytelling themes. I know that what speaks most to my heart isn't for everyone, but I embrace the journey this story has opened. I love redemption stories and I think that's why Anna has stolen my heart. It's hard to imagine someone who has been through more, and lost more than her and yet she never lost sight of who she is and wants to be. There will be drama and friction ahead. How in the world do you gloss over what just happened and how do you explain how this woman suddenly appeared in the world? She has made connection with Ray and Judith in such a short time, but we haven't seen that connection play out yet.
I'm definitely doing great overall, just got too busy "adulting" as the kids say these days. Hah.
Yeah, and I actually relate more personally to the sunny-side girly-girl persona too. I'm not a very "darkness" person in general, but I am drawn to things with edge. I think it's because I want to explore my own edges. We all have them, and they can be scary but also fascinating, raw and honest. I think I am enjoying seeing you exploring yours. :)
@GalacticGal Part One turns the heat up to 2 or 3. Part Two turns it up to 5, maybe 6. Part Three turns it up to 20 and rips the knob off.? Of all the chapters I written across both S&D and UTTS, Part Three of this one is in the top 2 or 3. I can't wait to unleash it, but I'm sticking to my schedule.
The rollercoaster ride you are going to go on, laughs, tears, fears, hope, will be worth the wait. I will apologize now. Part Three is a really really long one. I thought about shrinking it down but that would just ruin it. You will experience so much emotionally but you won't be disappointed. My canon of memorable characters has expanded by two. Danielle, Londyn, and Mimi are joined by Anna and Rayvn.
Sweet potato nachos? I thought it was a funny joke but now I can't stop thinking about it lol
Has anyone had such a thing?
I mean, if you took the sweet potatoes and sliced them really thin and did them either in the air fryer or under the broiler, they could be crisp enough to serve as chips without being too oily/heavy to be palatable with cheese sauce... Maybe some green bell pepper, chopped chiles, lime and cilantro for that fresh herby California touch...
She's with a big group of people, including Judith Ward. Surely they have security around them
Hah, you would think ? Ah I love Inna breaking the silence and letting out the news that Rayvn is betrothed. Very sad backstory that Anna has, at least she was able to escape Victor. Judith had to ruin the moment and bring her back to reality. Though she did raise some good points. Glad that their plan is beginning to take form, hoping they are able to free Anna and themselves
This is just the beginning. Wait until I start writing Summer's cooking show in Tartosan Sun.? I haven't tried it yet but I do have a recipe somewhere for sweet potato nachos. It's basically substituting thinly sliced, crispy sweet potatoes for tortilla chips. The recipe I have calls for them to be baked so you were spot on. I thought I'd do them in the next couple of weeks with some homemade pico de gallo and guacamole.?
Anna hasn't had an easy life. Even her wonderful life with Karoly before they arrived in Forgotten Hollow was short lived. I'm sure she's finally going to find her happy ending.?
Anna and Rayvn got to work going through the books looking for any mention of the method for removing Anna's bond to Forgotten Hollow. Judith had gone for a walk while she made a mental note of the things she would need to get Anna out of Windenberg. First off was finding an explanation for why she and Rayvn were not on the same flight back as the studio crew. That was simple and straight forward, but it triggered another thought. Should they say something to the authorities when they got back to Windenberg? Would anybody believe them if they said there was a village in the mountains stuck in the 18th century and populated entirely by vampires and the few mortals they kept as servants and, well, meals? Judith was thinking it would be better to keep this quiet and let someone else be the one to run the gauntlet of unbelievers. âSeriously Judithâ she thought to herself, âif someone walked up to you and told this story youâd think they lost their minds and needed to be locked up for their own protectionâ. She didnât want Elle and Lilith to get away with what they were doing, but she couldnât come right and tell people what was happening here. She would keep thinking that one over. Though she also wondered if maybe she should recommend this place to Brytani Cho. Or the Bailey-Moonâs. https://i.imgur.com/nJ86u2B.png
Her bigger issue was to line up a private jet to avoid airport security and to discreetly whisk them back to Del Sol Valley while avoiding the media. She had flown private to and from Windenberg several times before, but which service did she trust the most to handle the situation with the utmost discretion? That was her problem for the moment. Getting Anna set up with an identity and paperwork to match was Rayvn's. Judith found that she did genuinely like Anna, it was hard not to. Judith had felt real sympathy for Anna's plight and for the bad hand life had dealt her. As Judith turned to head back to the house she spotted a familiar car coming into the village and heading towards Elle's castle. Judith realized it was the same car and the same slimy little man who had delivered them here. She saw the car head up the hill to Elle's castle. She was tempted to sneak up there and see what was happening. As she neared the house she heard what sounded like a man's anguished cry for help wafting down to her on the breeze. It didn't take a genius to figure out who was the author of that sound. So Ivan's car was up there for the taking. The only problem was she knew it was a stick shift. She had never made it past the first lesson on how to drive one having given up after ten minutes and never successfully letting the clutch out and not stalling the engine even once. The only chance they had was if Rayvn could prove a quick learner.
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Rayvn was surprised to find the books and the bookcase itself free of dust and cobwebs. In every old horror movie she could remember the front of the bookcase was laced with spiderwebs and all the books had the dust of centuries on them. When she watched those movies it always struck her as an odd device. If you're immortal and you have no internet or tv what else was there to do but reading and housekeeping? It appeared to her that these vampires were more well-read than the ones from the old movies. For that matter the entire village was immaculate compared to what she imagined it would look like. There were still cobwebs here and there, and in some places the plaster was cracked, but it wasnât really what she would have imagined. After skimming through more than a dozen books each, Anna found what she had been looking for. https://i.imgur.com/pGPdfHl.png?1
"I found it!" she said as she jumped up off the sofa. "There is a potion that will break my bond!"
"That's fantastic Anna." Rayvn wrapped her in a hug. "What do we need?" https://i.imgur.com/LFU7AcD.png
"We need garlic, wolfsbane, plasma fruit, valerian root, and mandrake. But there is a problem. The only place where you will find mandrake and valerian root in Forgotten Hollow is in Elle's castle. She has a room where she and Lilith make and store the various potions they use."
"I assume you know where this room is?"
"Yes. It is on the first of the subterranean levels near what she calls the âlesser dungeonsâ. That is where she and Lilith keep the mortals they call 'pets' and the higher rank of servants. I will have to be very careful." https://i.imgur.com/3lcXXN1.png
Judith came through the door, the rustle of her voluminous skirts announcing her arrival before she appeared in the doorway, bathed in the light from the candles flanking the door. "How quickly do you think you can learn to drive a stick shift?"
"What makes you ask that?"
"That little weasel that brought us here just arrived. Long story short, I'm fairly confident he will no longer be needing his car."
"I don't think Elle's going to allow me to take driving lessons. Anyway my problem is I'm just really horrible at working the clutch without stalling the engine. I can do it, but it usually takes me a few tries to get it right. And I'll have to do while I'm scared out of my mind. Under the circumstances I'm all for trying. What's the worst that can happen?" https://i.imgur.com/zX9FDaQ.png
"You kill the engine at the worst possible moment, they catch us, and I become a scullery maid. That's the worst that can happen."
"No pressure" Anna said, which was met with gales of laughter. https://i.imgur.com/RyyFu3v.png
When Rayvn was finally able to regain her composure, "You're a quick learner Anna. So we need a plan. Where can we find the other items we need?"
âEverything I will need is in that room. Elle keeps the room well stocked so I know I will find everything I need in there. Itâs the bigger matter of getting in to the room, but I can use my mist form to get in. You can help me by collecting some of those same items to take with us so that once we reach safety I can cure myself of my vampirism. I will need ten sprigs of wolfsbane, ten plasma fruits, and ten cloves of garlicâŚ.â
âAnd a big bag of breath mints!â Judith said.
âYou can find those items not far from here. There are several patches of wild garlic and wolfsbane within a few steps of the house. The nearest plasma fruit tree is a short distance beyond that.
âWhy donât you mix up that part of the potion ahead of time so that you can do what you need to do faster?â
âI will be using mist form to enter the castle and I will not be able to carry it with me. Donât worry, I can mix this very quickly.â
"What about these clothes?" Judith asked. "We can't simply pop up in Windenberg dressed like this without attracting attention. I haven't seen our belongings since we woke up the other morning. What happened to them?"
âThey ordered me to dispose of them. I made it look like I did, but they are safely hidden in the attic. I did not mention it to you because I did not wish for either of you to do anything impulsive and show up in public wearing your old clothes and alert Elle and Lilith. Lilith in particular since she and Caleb are right across the way from you." https://i.imgur.com/HuvGNw7.png
"Could you get them down for us please, while we get the ingredients you need." Rayvn wasn't looking forward to this next bit. "Judith, we need to travel fast and light. Take only what you absolutely need.â
"What? Leave some of my stuff here? Are you out of your mind?"
"Do you think we can sneak up that hill with all of the stuff we brought? Or that once we start our run for it that we'll have time to stop off here and load everything into the trunk? We have to travel light and fast. Besides it's mostly clothes anyway."
"But I don't wear common off the rack clothing. I wear designer labels. Those are not cheap outfits?"
"Alright. If you get bogged down with your designer dresses and tops and get left behind you'll be the most stylish scullery maid in the world. Oh wait, Elle won't allow you to wear those outfits."
"TouchĂŠ. Fair enough. Though when we get back to the civilized world I would like a word with you about your bossiness."
"I do apologize Judith, but I'm only concerned about doing whatever we have to do to get all three of us out of here alive. I'll gladly face the consequences for stepping on your toes later."
Judith and Rayvn hurriedly gathered the ingredients Anna asked for. It was quick work as Anna had been right that the ingredients were mere steps from the house. Anna busied herself getting their belongings together for the ladies to sort through. Judith quietly realized the truth of what Rayvn had said, and she knew what she was leaving behind was only a small fraction of what she'd arrived with. She could replace those items easy enough and it beat the heck out of being trapped here forever. Meanwhile Rayvn's next step was to get Anna outfitted with a new look. Judith had made a good point that they should not show up in Windenberg looking like they just stepped out of 1823. Things were going to start happening fast so there would be no time later to change. They were all going to have to arrive at the castle ready to run for their lives. In spite of the seriousness of the situation, Rayvn couldnât help thinking how she could run twice as fast in leather pants and six-inch heels than she could in this ridiculous outfit. It had been fun at first. A bit of goofy cosplay fun. But their current situation had taken all of the fun out of it.
Rayvn joined Anna in the bedroom. âSay goodbye to that dress Anna. You no longer have to wear these godawful clothes. How have you managed it for 250 years?â
âItâs all Iâve ever had. After a couple of centuries you don't even notice anymore.â
Rayvn quickly grabbed the red leather jacket, black tee, and white pants she had been wearing when they arrived. Luckily Anna was very close to Rayvnâs size. âYou have been a big help and youâve taken great care of me and Judith. And you really are a sweet person. This outfit Iâm giving you is yours now. A small gift to say thank you.â https://i.imgur.com/uwT5nvb.png
âI couldnât possibly take these. They are beautiful but they're yours.â
âNot anymore. Theyâre yours. I want you to have them. We have so much to do to get you ready for the modern world. This is your first of many new outfits. And besides which Judith and I owe you a huge debt for helping us get out of here.â
âI feel so different in these clothes. What do you call this footwear? These are the most comfortable shoes Iâve ever worn. Oh how I wish I could see myself in the mirror.â https://i.imgur.com/fCDozUB.png
âWe call them sneakers. I forgot itâs been centuries since youâve actually seen yourself. My phone may not work, but the camera does. Let me take a picture of you and show you what you look like."
"What're you doing? What is that thing your holding?"
"It's called a cell phone. It can take pictures of things, but it does so many other things too. Pictures are like sitting for a painting only there is no painter and you can see the results instantly.
âYou are having me on! That thing can really do that? Is it safe?â
"It's ok Anna, it's totally safe. Alright hun, look at me and give me your best smile. Got it! https://i.imgur.com/nv5bdJz.png
"Let me show you what you look like. Say hello to Anna Eros, modern woman..." https://i.imgur.com/pDqzvHL.png
Anna's eyes lit up like a child on Christmas morning. "That's me?!" she nearly screamed with delight as she stared wide-eyed at the screen. https://i.imgur.com/qMsHGfe.png
"Yes, that's you Anna. See, even after all you've been through you are still beautiful! Inside and out.â https://i.imgur.com/Q541YZn.png
"I didn't know what time and the transformation had done to me. I..." Tears began to well in the corners of her eyes as she recalled Karoly taking her in his arms, kissing her gently, sweetly, and telling her she was the most beautiful woman in the world. That had been so long ago, but she could still feel the thrill that went through her as his lips met hers, and smell the lovely aroma of his rosewater cologne. Rayvn put her arm around Anna's shoulder and gave her a little squeeze. Anna shook herself. She had to keep her wits about her if they had any chance of getting out of here. She could confront her emotions later. âMy eyes though, are they really that red?â
âYes. Sheâs going to need sunglasses until she gets the cure.â Judith said. She had slipped into the room as Anna and Rayvn had been discussing the photo. âIâm sorry Anna, but those eyes will draw attention.â
âI do not need sunglasses. If I hide my vampire form, my dark form, I think my eyes should go back to their normal color. Itâs just easier to stay in my dark form so I use it at all times. I did not know that my eyes were that color when I use it thoughâ. Anna switched forms and her eyes regained their deep blue.
âYou have the most beautiful blue eyesâ Judith said.
âSheâs right.â Rayvn said. âI need to get changed myselfâ It was then that Rayvn noticed what Judith was wearing. "Heels, Judith? Really?â
âI only have one pair of sneakers and theyâre back in Del Sol Valley." She couldn't keep the snarky comment to her self. "Silly me I should have realized we were going to be running for our lives from vampires when I packed. Look, donât worry about me. Iâve been wearing heels everyday since I was a teenager. I just hope when the time comes you two will be able to keep up with me!â
Rayvn got changed and joined Anna and Judith for one last review of the plans. âI will need some of my vampiric powers to get into the castle and back out again. My powers are the quickest and safest way. I hope we donât need them afterwards, but I canât return to being human again until we reach Del Sol Valley. Elle and Lilith canât get to Windenberg quickly without help, but even then as long as we are there we need to be careful and I will need to retain my powers to defend us. It's not Elle and Lilith we need to worry about once we leave Forgotten Hollow, it's the henchmen they have in the outside world. If anybody comes after us in Windenberg it would be them. I can take care of them and they're not likely to try attacking a vampire. They'll probably just wait for a day or two and then send word to Elle that they couldn't find us." https://i.imgur.com/A6hkCiH.png
âI know the private airline Iâm going to contact to get us home. I've used them before and they can be ready to go in a few hours time. We're looking at roughly six hours from the call to the steps of the plane.â
âI am very curious about this plane thing. Is it like those things you call cars?â⨠https://i.imgur.com/hpE39yZ.png
âUmmâŚyes and no. Weâll explain it on the way to Windenbergâ Rayvn said. âRight now letâs make sure we have the plan straight"
"I use my mist form to enter the castle, make the Potion of Dissolution, and drink it."
"While youâre doing that we get everything into the car and we wait inside with our heads down.â Rayvn motioned to herself and Judith. âWe will leave a window half open for you to slip in throughâ Rayvn said. https://i.imgur.com/Nd2UYE5.png
"I leave using my mist form and I materialize inside the car."
"When I hear your voice, I pee my pants, start the car and drive like hell" Rayvn said.
"Pee your pants?" Anna asked. https://i.imgur.com/9rUjOR7.png
"My nerves are so on edge right now. Any sudden noise and Iâm going to pee my pants.â
"I promise I will try not to make you pee your pants."
"Judith, Anna, I think it's time for us to get out of here. I just want to go home, enjoy a nice hot shower, and a bottle of tequila."