"LadyLobster;15576276" wrote:
This chapter was heartbreaking--even more than the last one. :'( Poor, poor Eli. Things aren't looking good with Daddy Williams, but judging by his reaction, I guess Sam must've at least told her dad about the father of her baby and decided to keep it. There might be hope for Eli yet... I just hope he doesn't let his emotions ruin his parole.
Hang in there, Eli! Sam will come around...won't she? :'(
I actually rewrote the entire chapter last week after pushing out Chapter 10. I'm glad I did. And yeah, Daddy Williams is not a nice man. In fact, in my real legacy play save the two are enemies. >:)
"pammiechick;15576733" wrote:
I'm going to say this, Eli...I hate Sam. She's no good for you! If she can run away from your love because of some plum things you did as a kid then good riddance. And that a*sswipe of a father doesn't need to be in your life,messing it up! I'm pleading with your creator to find you a great wife. Someone who won't bolt because of your past.
Please. Get over her. You can do better!!!
Awww, I did it again. I made my readers hate one of my favorites. >:) :D >:) I write women characters with really b*itchy attitudes, and I don't know why, but it's hella fun. :D But I agree with the a*sswipe comment. Grant isn't a nice man, at all.
