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MrsRacooney
8 years agoNew Spectator
Finally! I'm waiting to answer this since the morning, so... no further delay! :D
Who is your favorite character? Why?
Phew. Unlike with most other stories, I do like all the characters so far. All of them have one or several character traits that I can relate with, f.e. Etsi's uncertainty would totally be me :D But in the moment I agree with @15aewar and yourself about Etu. The contradiction between his optimism and naivety on one side and his self-chosen job on the other is simply too funny to not love him :D
Do you have any questions about the Daughters of the Sun universe? Laws, gods, culture, etc.?
You can't ask me such questions! That's the kind I can't answer until I'm reading. In general, I'm always interested to learn as much as possible about other worlds.
How do you feel about the chapter lengths?
As long as it fits for you, it fits for me as well. No need to complain there from my side, it's good.
Do you have any constructive criticism? What can I improve?
I'm sure that would be a lot easier to answer if there were already more chapters. So far, no criticism. Your characters are likeable and deep, you're putting much effort in the setting and your writing style includes feelings as well as descriptions. You're doing a great job!
Well, usually I don't have many questions but that's rather my personality than lack of interest (honestly, if I can't come up with any that doesn't mean I don't like your stories!) In this special case, I do have one though.
What gave you the idea of Etsi and Etu? You already told us you had an advisor but characters need development, what was your way toward them?
Who is your favorite character? Why?
Phew. Unlike with most other stories, I do like all the characters so far. All of them have one or several character traits that I can relate with, f.e. Etsi's uncertainty would totally be me :D But in the moment I agree with @15aewar and yourself about Etu. The contradiction between his optimism and naivety on one side and his self-chosen job on the other is simply too funny to not love him :D
Do you have any questions about the Daughters of the Sun universe? Laws, gods, culture, etc.?
You can't ask me such questions! That's the kind I can't answer until I'm reading. In general, I'm always interested to learn as much as possible about other worlds.
How do you feel about the chapter lengths?
As long as it fits for you, it fits for me as well. No need to complain there from my side, it's good.
Do you have any constructive criticism? What can I improve?
I'm sure that would be a lot easier to answer if there were already more chapters. So far, no criticism. Your characters are likeable and deep, you're putting much effort in the setting and your writing style includes feelings as well as descriptions. You're doing a great job!
Well, usually I don't have many questions but that's rather my personality than lack of interest (honestly, if I can't come up with any that doesn't mean I don't like your stories!) In this special case, I do have one though.
What gave you the idea of Etsi and Etu? You already told us you had an advisor but characters need development, what was your way toward them?
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