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@15aewar
Do you have any questions about the Daughters of the Sun universe? Laws, gods, culture, etc.?
None so far! I like how the culture is a bit more lenient than most other Amazon challenges, i.e. slaves aren't always killed after breeding.
Right?! I knew I needed to change it slightly because I didn't want to be creating and introducing new slaves every other chapter! :joy:
Do you have any constructive criticism? What can I improve?
Other than a few instances of "women" when it should be "woman", there's none so far!
If that's my worst grammar mistake, I can live with that! :joy: I get so stressed trying to write past tense.
Thank you for your answers, and for creating this reading circle! I'm loving it!
Do you have any questions about the Daughters of the Sun universe? Laws, gods, culture, etc.?
None so far! I like how the culture is a bit more lenient than most other Amazon challenges, i.e. slaves aren't always killed after breeding.
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I can also see a way for a slave to stay alive. Can you say carrot soup?
Right?! I knew I needed to change it slightly because I didn't want to be creating and introducing new slaves every other chapter! :joy:
Do you have any constructive criticism? What can I improve?
Other than a few instances of "women" when it should be "woman", there's none so far!
If that's my worst grammar mistake, I can live with that! :joy: I get so stressed trying to write past tense.
Thank you for your answers, and for creating this reading circle! I'm loving it!
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