Thanks for the feedback guys. Maybe it's not past and present tense mixing. Below is another example of what I'm trying to do.
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Today, I had an awesome day at work, and now I'm just having some good ole fun with my best friend, Ashley. We're just hanging out and catching up on old times. I remember the good ole days of partying and all that good ole fun.
"Do you remember that time when we went to that concert in Montreal?" I asked Ashley.
"Yes, I do!" Ashley replied. "I remember you getting up on the stage and singing with the band!"
I laughed. "Yeah, I remember that too!"
Me and Ashley sure had a lot of fun back in the day. We still do, but yeah, those where the days!
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The story also involves adventure and time travel. Below is example of the adventure side:
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Me and Ashly made our way down the valley, and we stumbled upon something. There's a city in the distance.
"Look over there," I said to Ashley. "It's a city."
"I wonder if that's Montreal," Ashley replied.
"It might be," I responded. "Maybe we should go check it out."
I wonder if that city really is our home in this future world. It is quite possible, but it might be too dangerous to go and find out.
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Does mixing it like this work?
It reads just fine. I thought you meant having past tense and present tense in the same sentence --- Now that would be a no-no. Works just fine the way you've got it. 😁
