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I wouldn't use - or trust - AI either. But, that being said, saying emotion, expression and details are unnecessary is a bit on the glib side. Without those, it's hard for the reader/audience to get involved - we may as well be reading about robots. Don't go to the extent of a Robert Jordan who would absolutely dictate everything (probably due to either ego or insecurities, who knows). You have to discover for yourself just what is enough and what is too much.
I'll have to get the current piece I'm working on edited (yet again) and post some snippets here to give you an idea of what I mean by not going overboard but still allowing the reader to invest in a story.
Hey there, sorry what I meant was not getting rid of the expression and details altogether but how the AI over did it with the expression and details, the unnecessary over expression. It made it sound just way out there. It was too much. Thanks for sharing part of your story. I'm just starting to read it now.
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