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New Scout

3 years ago

Legend Concept: Morale

Legend Name: Morale Real Name: Vincent Gold Nationality: American Skin Color: White Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: Black Height: 5''9 Age: 21 (Current in-universe Age) Representation Community: ...

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DrWizardo

Seasoned Ace

3 years ago

I look at this and see another Rhapsody and Rampart mix.

The tactical could work but the numbers (especially availability) seems very high.

The ultimate is pretty much Shiela, and has a TON of bullets. R301 is hugely popular and you want a better one with basically free bullets, taking no space... yeah...NO.

The passive, depending on how it's implemented sounds like sound visualization in Fortnite which is a rather huge pair of steering wheels. Having it all the time makes him a scouting legend close to Seer if not better. And always accessible it makes it even worse + might not really fit with the ADHD theme as concentration also plays part.

Looks and story I don't care for so I won't comment on it other than it seems like we already have it, potentially minus ADHD which you might not notice in other characters anyway.

VersaTheCreator
New Scout
3 years ago
@DrWizardoThis is pretty good advice. What would you recommend I change to potentially make this concept better?

I do understand that the R-301 is hugely popular (as it is one of my favorite Weapons myself (my favorite loadout is the R-301 Carbine and Mastiff Shotgun), so now I understand that I should change that.

I do have ADHD (High-Functioning) and we can "Hyperfocus" on things, which means exactly how it's said (can have an extreme focus on a certain thing) and that's why it's always available (though Deaf people may have a problem using it so I'm going to change it as well).
- DrWizardo
  Seasoned Ace
  3 years ago
  @Versalord I'll think about it and get back to you.
  
  My kid has Adhd and while he can get really into something, that usually means he's a bit zoned out. So it can be a bit hard to contact him or for him to switch out from that task 🙂
  
  It's a fantasy world 700 years into the future tho, so a lot might be possible.
  - VersaTheCreator
    New Scout
    3 years ago
    @DrWizardo Me and your kid are the same. Once I'm into something, I don't like being bothered while I'm trying to focus on the task.