"TheRealCaloNord;c-2038116" wrote:
"Ichiraikou;c-2028481" wrote:
Since my feedback I've been constantly thinking about your kit idea. It really frustrated me that I was unable to provide proper feedback to it (especially to the lead). I ended up doing my own version of him. You have really inspired me.
I have given you a shoutout. I would just have placed it here in the comments but it was just too big and did go in quite a different direction than I had expected (or this one). So I just put it in it's own discussion.
You can find it here: https://forums.galaxy-of-heroes.starwars.ea.com/discussion/220780/the-mandalorian-kit-idea/p1?
Wow, I’m sorry I’m seeing this so late! Your feedback is exceptional. I will make a few edits for sure, you had a lot of good points about wording and purpose. I’ll take a look at your kit- thanks so much!
That's ok. I'm just glad I could help you. I would like it if you left some feedback over at my version as well.
I like the changes you made. His new lead is way better, I really like what you did with the bonus protection and the new ability there. His 2 uniques are also really nice. Wasn't thinking that with mandalorian's resolve, but is still pretty good and unique. Well done. Only thing that still bothers me is one sentence in his lead:
"TheRealCaloNord;d-220514" wrote:
Anytime an ally falls below 100% Health, all allies gain +20% Turn Meter as well as gain Advantage and +20% Bonus Protection for two turns which cannot be prevented.
The only reason this bothers me is because it is poorly worded. I mean I get what you where trying but it is quite clear the duration is not for the turn meter, so the "as well as gain" part unnecessarily breaks the sentence (especially the second gain). The effect itself is really nice thou. I would word it like this:
Whenever an ally falls below 100% Health, all allies gain 20% Turn Meter, 20% Bonus Protection, and Advantage for 2 turns. These effects can't be Prevented.
Then again that is just me. Other than this I quite like the improvements and haven't found anything I don't like yet. Great work.
P.s. I would also appreciate it if you would give some feedback on my version of him.
