XOX1 wrote:
Okay... So I have a couple of lots that haven't made the 100 mark yet. I consider the 100 mark to be the criteria for continuing to keep a lot posted on my page for downloading on the Exchange. I have recently learned how to upload with a cover picture, and those builds have exceeded 100 DLs. I work really hard to make beautiful creations, and it saddens me greatly if they do not get the response I think they deserve.
Here is one that still has only 85 at the time of this posting. It was posted before I learned how to post using a cover picture...
Another creation by GriffCorp. International's Legendary Scientist, Potter Planter.
A Complete Makeover of Sunset Valley's Recurve Strand done in a Pirate theme!
All Skills and Needs are provided, except music.
10 Money Trees, 10 Life Plants, 6 Omni Plants, and 8 Death Flowers that can be Harvested.
(Remove old Recurve Strand. Flatten lot in edit town / edit lot mode. Remove all trees and flora. Place Potter Planter's Pirate Strand.) Enjoy!
The GriffCorp. International motto is- "We are here, to help you, help us!
A bad day at the beach is better than a good day at work!
http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=945282
Hi and welcome
Ty for giving us the opportunity to try and help.
First I want to say that I'm glad that you have set yourself certain criteria iro your creations. it is a good way to improve on your skill and upon reaching your goals you get more satisfaction and inspiration for your future builds.
Then I've got 3 comments on this creation:
1) The house is too Box type and/or the roof can be played with to maybe make it 2 or 3 different styles/types of roof.
2) The landscaping is a bit on the dull side for me. Use some of the flat beach plants and scatter them in clusters on the beach, u can even lift some of the areas of beach to give it the effect that it's dunes and make some flower beds close to the house, just to brighten things up a bit.
3) The Interior pattern and wood color is just too much the same right thru the house. I would say, make the bedrooms a different pattern and the ensuite to suit the bedroom then.You can still use blue but play around with different shades of blue.
There's also a way to let u'r chimney blend in with the house. I don't know if u know how to do it. If u don't just let me know and we can go thru it.
