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graceymanorsLol! 😄 That's why it has been such a joy to watch you grow as a writer for the past few years. 😊⭐
I now want to rewrite it, with proper descriptions. XD
Like "
William took Belle's hand gently, giving it a kiss.He was much more charming than Gaston.Belle didn't understand though.He seemed so mean, course and unrefined; yet here he is treating her nicer than anyone has ever done.Obviously, there was something there, that she hadn't seen before."
Should really be
"William gently took Belle's hand and placed a soft kiss upon it, his touch filled with a tenderness that took her by surprise. He was far more charming than Gaston, a stark contrast to the rough exterior she had come to expect. Belle was puzzled. William had always seemed so harsh, coarse, and unrefined, yet here he was, treating her with a kindness she had never known. There was clearly something more to him, something hidden beneath the surface that she hadn’t noticed before."
- emorrill4 months agoHero
BOOM! ⭐ Yassss! 😁🥰
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