Interesting choice with Meredith; people who were bullied can sometimes grow up to become bullies themselves, I know plenty who have done, but this is rarely something covered in stories- so it's cool you went with that. Sad about Braeden's father though, poor guy, but hopefully their date will go well!
Oh, Eilonwy and Wardon? I am quite surprised. I thought it would be nice if he worked through his differences with Rosalinda and fell in love with her instead. Until now he didn't have any interactions with Eilonwy that we know of, and only thought that she would be girlfriend material. I am quite the fan of the enemies to lovers trope so it's sad to see that ship sink :D It's nice seeing Sulani again though!
5- Ugh, Meredith...I hope she gets her comeuppance soon. I love how Braeden is so blunt with rejecting her. 6- I really like the backstory with the sorceress, and the warnings against Zelda being tempted into dark magic. As much as I want Karma to bite Meredith in the rear, revenge is sometimes a dangerous path, and sometimes the positions of victim and bully can change. 7- Meredith's 'apology'...I reckon she's definitely lying. I think she'd only genuinely submit to Zelda if Zelda became stronger than her. 8- Good how you still show the trauma from what happened with her dad popping up in her daily life. Introducing a former student is cool and I like the tie between Untamed magic and potential darkness. Seems revenge is becoming a theme amongst some of the characters, but will it pay off- for Ragnar, Meredith, or for Zelda? 9- Liking the personal development with Zelda feeling more comfortable about Braeden despite her father's abuse. Also, VERY interesting personal development with the teen pregnancy! I didn't see it coming. Wonder how Zelda will cope? 10- Lovelovelove the ball gown ~ L.Faba would definitely just point and laugh at Meredith and I know for a fact Morgyn wouldn't be bothered!
