Schemes and Dreams
Hey everybody.👋 Welcome to my second story. I'm hard at work on getting things ready for this one. I thought I would go ahead and start the thread and give you an idea what's going on. I'll post occa...
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@DaniRose2143, awesome
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I enjoyed the paparazzi characters. I think they could be interesting bad guys... either as minor irritants or major villains. Lots of cool potential there.
I love the conflict between Octavia and Thorne. They are clearly not your usual loving couple of soulmates and that makes me curious about how their relationship is going to develop.
Nancy is clearly a smart criminal... and I like the way you use that to establish the narrative tone of her villainy. She, and you, will not be bumping people off left and right (unlike certain other writers who will remain me) but that doesn't make her any less scary or dangerous. I love the wicked contempt she has for Malcolm and his father (and almost everyone else). It really establishes her as a villain for me. I can't help but wonder what may happen if she and Judith ever cross swords.
Finally, Mimi... yeah, I still love Mimi. She's the Hero character for me at that moment. Maybe the only one...
I love your characters in this, but so far I don't really like any of them, apart from Mimi, if you take my meaning. That's not a bad thing... just a thing.
I enjoyed the paparazzi characters. I think they could be interesting bad guys... either as minor irritants or major villains. Lots of cool potential there.
I love the conflict between Octavia and Thorne. They are clearly not your usual loving couple of soulmates and that makes me curious about how their relationship is going to develop.
Nancy is clearly a smart criminal... and I like the way you use that to establish the narrative tone of her villainy. She, and you, will not be bumping people off left and right (unlike certain other writers who will remain me) but that doesn't make her any less scary or dangerous. I love the wicked contempt she has for Malcolm and his father (and almost everyone else). It really establishes her as a villain for me. I can't help but wonder what may happen if she and Judith ever cross swords.
Finally, Mimi... yeah, I still love Mimi. She's the Hero character for me at that moment. Maybe the only one...
I love your characters in this, but so far I don't really like any of them, apart from Mimi, if you take my meaning. That's not a bad thing... just a thing.
