Vampire Kisses
VAMPIRE KISSES If you like reading your stories with atmospheric music, adding to the suspense, this story is for you!! Just head over to my new blog Please leave a comment let me know what you ...
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@Orchidah1 I can relate. This kind of work takes time and patience. Looking for a pose can take more time than actually using it. :)
Well, I have to say that you've demonstrated that childishness very well. It still is just a bit too much, but it definitely does its job to show the point.
This narrative approach has its potential. If Raven's narration suddenly becomes much more serious and down to the point, then whatever is coming is a lot more serious then what was before. There is definitely a tool to be exploited.
Anyway, I more than certain that you know what you're doing :smile: Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Well, I have to say that you've demonstrated that childishness very well. It still is just a bit too much, but it definitely does its job to show the point.
This narrative approach has its potential. If Raven's narration suddenly becomes much more serious and down to the point, then whatever is coming is a lot more serious then what was before. There is definitely a tool to be exploited.
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Why do I get this sneaking suspicion that Raven might not be human (Partially or completely) or is related to non-humans? Her face during the exploration of the house reveals more than just enjoyment. To me, she looks like she ACTUALLY belongs there, not merely thinks the belongs there. As if her blood is speaking to her and she simply doesn't understand it.
Anyway, I more than certain that you know what you're doing :smile: Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
